Wow. I've never read a fic that was as explorative as this one. Props for the creativity for making it read like a palindrome. On top of that, it was a really convincing palindrome. I really liked your piece and the tone/style was pretty amazing as well.

Great to see your writing Sarkneys again.

I really enjoy your unique writing style and the intricate details you weave with ease. I must admit however, I was a little lost in this story. There a many reasons for this including the fact that it is 3am here and I am dead tired. So to be fair, I will reread this story later today. Good work.

Lisa :)

fantastic fic, loved it.

Long wait, no see. But there you're back with a little piece of work after all this time. Perhaps you're back for more? It shows you're still thinking of Alias/Sarkney in times.
This story is short but intense, how you describe her feelings, in short form their action life in short forth and reverse, and than his feelings, like creating a circle. This could also be regarded as a line and a palindrome.
Well done.