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welleg
2007-07-11 . chapter 17
I never got around to reviewing this the first time I read it - really good.
garnetred
2007-02-09 . chapter 18
Excellent chapter. What a great way to finish this chapter and sort of give us a sneak peak at the sequel. Please start the sequel soon.
A J
2007-02-06 . chapter 18
Oh, you are such a tease! OK, don't twist my e-arm, I'm going to read already, Catch ya next story,
A J
yellow power
2007-02-05 . chapter 18
Interesting! Who’s he? I guess I’ll just have to wait for the sequel, lol.
The Tate Twins
2007-02-05 . chapter 17
Sorry I didn't post this sooner! It was written when I first read the chapter, but I haven't had a chance to post it till now. Anyways, on w/ the review...

::Cries:: I can't believe it's % ! The second I finished reading the chapter I ran to my room and screamed into my pillow. Why, you ask? B/c of how it ended. Ppl are together, but still have feelings for other ppl, and all of that kind of stuff. So the reason I screamed was b/c...I can live w/ that! I'm content w/ that ending, and it's driving me crazy! I was expecting to either be really happy or really sad. But now I'm neither...or both...or...or...SOMETHING!

And, I now have proof that you're as good an author as I keep saying you are. I almost (but only almost) felt bad enough for Sky that I wanted him and Z to be together. But it was an ALMOST! I've not become a Sky/Zer yet.*GASP* YET?¿? What am I saying? *Bangs head on desk* No! Bad Z! I will not be a Sky/Zer! No, no, no, no, no! Arg! (Hey, I be a pirate! U_o Does that smiley look like a pirate to you?) Ugh! See? Do you see what Sky/Z does to me? It makes me talk about smileys and pirates!

*Takes deep breath* Okay...I am calm now... (U_o haha, pirate!) Anyways, yes I want you to do a sequel...but what if Bridge and Z break up? What if Sky doesn't love Syd? Ah! You haven't even written it yet, and already I'm freaking out! No, it has to be Bridge/Z! It has to be!

*Grins* But...I guess I'm just gonna have to wait and see, won't I? Lol, thanks for all the laughs, headaches, and heartaches that came along w/ this wonderful story!

Luv Alwayz,
~Z~
the real vampire
2007-02-04 . chapter 18
Oh intriguing. *Runs to read the new story*
Sergeant Scarlett
2007-02-04 . chapter 18
Wo! Looking forward to the sequel! Off to read it now! XD
DisneyHeart
2007-01-30 . chapter 17
Please continue with it, It is a really good story. I would really like to see Bridge and Z togather, but it is your story. Other than that I like how you are going with it. Good Job. Pleasse write more.
jesusfreakfairy
2007-01-29 . chapter 17
definetly make it into a trilogy! you can't leave it like that! argh!

i wont stop pestering until you write 1! hehe! great story =D please make it a trilogy? *pouts*
Inflatable Marshmellows
2007-01-29 . chapter 17
AAH I HATE YOU! I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU! HOW COULD YOU JUST END IT LIKE THAT? AH! BAKA BAKA BAKA! You just left me hanging? How could you?

I NEEDA KNOW IF BRIDGE IS WITH Z! AH! /bangs head against desk cause she didn't find out/ You made me all YAY! I'LL FIND OUT WHO Z IS WITH! then you crushed my feelings! /starts sobbing uncontrollably/

Now I'll have to go shake my fist at the moon and cry myself to sleep because of what you did. /sniff sniff/

Oh, and btw, please oh please write a sequel... or the third part of the story thingy cause I wana know...

Who's Bridge's girl tonight?

/raises hand/

I don't mind being his girl. =p
Mara
2007-01-28 . chapter 17
Hi! well I just have something to say: I LOVE YOUR STORY! PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE! I really hope Sky and Z end up together it's just that I don't like the idea of Syd/Sky I hate that couple It's better SKY/Z but there are just a few fics about them PLEASE CONTINUE and make it an Sky/Z fic
yellow power
2007-01-28 . chapter 1
YOU DEFINITIVELY SHOULD DO A THIRD PART!
You were right, I did like this ending, it leaves me a lot of hope for Syd and Sky and Bridge and Z to get together in the sequel, it didn't seem very possible if you ended it up on this chap, but now that you're thinking of doing a sequel (which you MUST do, lol) you can explore on their relationships even more, 'cause in fact the ones you dealed with here were SJ and SZ mostly.
This was a perfect ending!! THANK YOU!
I'm so looking forward to reading the sequel.
Love
Vero
garnetred
2007-01-28 . chapter 17
Excellent chapter. I would love to see a third story. Definitely with this love triangle between Bridge, Z and Sky going on. I, mean, this is not really over. Then there's Syd's attempt to win over Sky. There is so much left unanswered here. Please write soon.
M.L. Shards
2007-01-28 . chapter 17
GAH! Don't end it there! CONTINUE! PWeeze?
zarah joyce
2007-01-28 . chapter 17
I refuse to believe this is the end. No! *sobs*

You know, I had a feeling that the 'end' won't really be THE end. Because there are still a lot of loose ends. And, you still haven't placed Z with Sky! Yes, I'm pushy. Heehee XD

Till next story!
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