I feel so sorry for him even though I'm big YoruSoi supporter.

... very well written. A little... mature though. But I enjoyed it. I'm surprrised you didn't get many reviews on this. :)

wow...angst...I like! XD
the only thing was...whose point of view were you telling the story from? At the beginning it seemed like it was Yoruichi but then it switched to Kisuke...was that intentional?

I thought you'd post this in halcyon days but okay... Read it in the community and just wanted to leave a review. I have yet to find something which you've written that I don't completely adore so... :)