Holy stinkin' crap the end of this chapter nearly had me out of my chair and on the floor laughing. What a hell of a way to have a star-crossed moment between two seriously hot guys who now, for sure, have the hots for each other. The epicness of it is just priceless. No doubt I'll be reading the rest of this when I can.

Yeah I know, it took me for-**'-ever to review but I've got my own works to focus on at the same time. I read other people's stuff when I need to think. But yeah, you'll be hearin' from me again at some point. There'd better be a sequel to this or somethin' or somebody's in trouble.

Ja ne,
Blue

Huh. Very interesting. Despite this being named after a show that I seriously don't like, this is an exceptional piece of literary work. I wouldn't mind looking into this further in the future.

You're on my list kid. Keep it up.

Ja ne,
Blue

I lurve this story! Especially how you're getting in some of the playful rivalry between them - that part's really sweet. ^^ The only thing I would suggest is... WRITE MORE DUDE!

Beth x

wow i really like this story!;D
its super good!
though, you haven't updated in a very long time, so i just hope you didn't stop writing it >.<
great job!

Haha! Naruto and Sasuke have to live together. XD Very nice. And HA!! Take that Sai! Yeesh! Anywho, It will be one year since you've updated this story last in 11 days. Is there any chance, any chance at all, that you will update this story again?!?!?! PLEASE! *Gives the infamous puppy-eyed look*

Hm, so apparently this will definitely be one of those stories where I will hate Sai. Stories involving Sai differ in that, either I hate Sai, or I love him. Usually I wind up hating him. Haha, oh well. At least I love the real Sai. He provides some funny entertainment. ^_^

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! So I seriously love this chapter too. Jeez, hahaha.

Wow, damn good chapter.

Aww poor Naru. Well... more like poor everybody. Yeesh. Anywho, when Naruto gets charged and Sasuke has to build a case to prove Naruto's innocence, I'm guessing one of the things he'll be doing is finding a way to discredit Kabuto, making the witness unreliable, right? Hopefully. :)

Great, here enters Sai. The one against Naruto. Nice.

And that's where Sasuke and Naruto run into each other. Quite literally. ^_^ Very nice.

Ok so... I'm sort of confused on who's who but... the story has definitely caught hold of my interest. Onward!

I saw the fanart of this on deviantart and I immediately followed the link to this story right away xD Anything involving scheming Itachi and Kakashi HAS to be good :'D And it didn't disappoint; this story is quite fabulous :'D There were a few grammatical errors here and there, but it's still legible xD And there's a footnote for (1), but it's not indicated in the actual story text D: But other than that, it's lovely (:

OMG! please update soon!
you got us to the intriguing time of
the story!

Hey there! I've just read your story, well, at least part of it (I really hope that only part of it and I kind will see some in the near future) and I can say, that despite the fact that I'm only indulged (usually) in sasuxnaru relationship and action or whatever, your writing kept me glued till the very last (till now XD) chapter. The humor is excellently measured and placed in corresponding places, some are subtle and other are lucid but perfectly added nonetheless. Also the role of Itachi suits him just wonderfully - not overly possessive of the brother but even proud. It also kinda revolves solely around male couples, I mean Sasuke and Naruto, then Iruka with Kakashi, followed by Raidu and Genma and also Izumo and whoever, a little too male-ish XD seen merely Tsunade and her in the 9th chapter!
The story is good, I can't say it's brilliant but your skill for describing and writing in whole makes up for it. I know that you've updated long ago, still, maybe you are on this story and decided to continues, I would be grateful if you found the strength to post another chapter XD
hear from you soon (hopefully), Angela =]

p.s. I know my review isn't something worth reading or anything and I can't speak English fluently but perhaps it'll make you smile at least for a bit, thanks