I can't log in because my internet is being stupid, but thank you thank you THANK YOU for reposting this story!

I absolutely fell in love with this story! You need to write more to it please! This is the best story I have ever read! EVER! ^_^

Hmm, well, I just started and finished reading your story today. And quite honestly, I think it's just fine the way it is.

I LOVE IT! :D
^_^
Please, update son. Heh, heh.

Hm. Well, I think you should do the separate stories. It's not that hard to find the other one and put it one alert, too, especially if people are keeping up with this and have read the author's notes. It'll also help keep us all from getting confused. And, once you finish the other one (even if it takes a while), you can simply delete this one, plus move any chapters you don't think need editting over to the other story.

So, that's my opinion, but of course, they are your stories. You can really do what you want with them. I'll continue reading either way. ^^

Hehehe... And the plot arrives~

XD I cackled -so- hard at this chapter. Great start! Here's to the next~

i cant wait for the next chapter of STF! Keep writting!

What an orginal title that's like a translation of this one!

Hm...I've looked all over the place and am still not finding this new chapter of yours. Most people won't search as hard as I do, and even I gave up, so my advice would be to fix the problem ASAP before you lose too many fans, heh. Maybe post a link in your profile directly to the story so that it's less confusing?

Anyway, I'm eager to read it when you get around to showing me where it is. :P Did you want me to beta it or not? Entirely up to you of course, hehe, but most people send their writing to the beta first. ;) You can do what you want to do though, lol.

Take care, and have a nice day!

Melissa

Your writing isn't bad it's just hard to follow and a little fast paced. Try and add a little more desciption and have a pace you want to keep. It helps to draw out the plot and make changes as needed. Also do not kick yourself over spelling and gramer, most of us are not the biggest grammer finatics and that's what editors are for. If you can't find someone to edit try emailing it to a person you know personally thats an FMA fan and had some skill in that area.

Don't worry were only teen's not even published authors.

But do add a little discription and keep the information flow constent. All good books have those qualities it's okay to purposly not tell us stuff, and be sure to add foreshadowing.

Honestly I'm just as bad as youu are my published story is written two years ago not finished and the begining really really sucks. I found an editor (thank god my spelling is awful) and yeah, the later chapters are better so, don't sweat it or feel obligated to rewrite.
Just try it feels good to finish a peice. :)

Well, at least we'll see some progress at some point :)

I'd be glad to beta for you, as the other fanfics I'm currently beta'ing have been mostly inactive recently [all seven of them, I believe] >.<

And you said reccomend a piece of my writing [on , although that part didn't show up if you ended up typing the url]? While 'Impossible' happens to be my most popular, I believe 'Distant Love' contains better writing... although, they both have small amounts of shonen ai [nothing close to yaoi, though], so be forewarned.

And if I end up being considered as a beta, don't worry too much about me missing mistakes - my OCD acts up when I see spelling errors >__<

Other than that, good luck with everything! =)

Oh... you're calling for a beta now? Sorry I haven't reviewed in a whlie (sweatdrop) Hm.. well I guess I could beta if you want me too ^^ I don't really have any good works of mine to recomend... I guess you could read my 'I Hate You Cupid' Story, but it's not my best work. Actually... my best work isn't fanfiction but I love reading it ^^

I can't wait for you to rewrite STF! I have always adored and worshiped this story and I'm glad you're not going to abandon it! I mean, it's had almost 300 reviews ^^ I was also scared you abandoned this fic. Its great to see you're not giving up, though if it was because of your busy life and the fact that some authors prefer original stories to fanfiction then I wouldn't mind.

Good luck on your last year! I'm so excited for yoU!

Just so you know, I don't really recomend myself as a beta... if you find people that are better than me please do choose them ^^ I coudl also be a backup beta ^^

it's cool to see someone grow up. Congrats!

Well... I was going to ask to be a Beta but you said I needed to post a short example. And I'm horrible at providing those, so I guess I'm out >_

*Waves hand in the air* I'm a willing beta! :D I've been kinda sittin' on my ass as of lately for a while now, so I need something to do. x3 And, I'm excited for a new version of STF; although, I still do enjoy this one, just to let you know, hun! :3