I believe you've summed this up quite nicely. Great work and style. ~Orin

I like it! It's very honest, fresh and realistic. You have quite a gift with words. The images leap immediately into mind and stay there. I think you got the whole story in here. :)

That was awesome!! Host Club poetry! ^.^

Squee! This is brilliant. Just.. wow. I loved it! So clever!

i really like it, you should make this a proluge to a haruhiXall fic, i'd definatly read it, it would be an awsome fic,Ja ne !

frickin awesome! don't know if I've reviewed this one before...oh well! ^^ Best HC poem I've ever read!

This... this was just beyond words in its cute-ish form of greatness.

i like it. nice poem :)

Ha. This was pretty. Oh, such a scandal it would be to fall for their daughter (Tamaki and Kyouya)/sister (the rest)!

I loved this!

But Haruhi entertained the ladies,
never knowing of their hidden passions,
while father, mother, and her kind brothers
thought of how they’d break their “family” ties.

They would have her one day, their peasant queen.

I like that verse of the poem best. Oh! Such scandal in a family!

You know what? Someone should really hit Haruhi on the head cause she's being a little too oblivious to my liking.

Um, So... I absolutely adored your poem!

You pretty much rock. So, yeah.

!... Just thought that I'd add a few exclamation points to get my point across.

wow! that was really awsome! i love the way you wrote the poem, it was so unique!^-^ please write more cause you are and amazing writer!
-RequiemElise

this is good i like how you used poetry instead of normal writing. please you should write a norlam story though. going in detail this time. just as a sujesstion. (sorry i cant spell)

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Fascinating. I'm not usually one for fanfiction in poetry, much less free verse, but this was absolutely fascinating. It was easy to read and understand, with several easy spot metaphors and symbols. I can't say I know much about poetry writing, so I can't comment on the writing style, but all in all I enjoyed it. Keep writing. Perhaps next time it'll be written in common story telling style?

I liked it! Especially how every character had their own... verse? (Is that what you call it? Sorry, I don't know much about poems). Of course, with the twins as an exception... Although theirs was shared, it was my favourite. =P