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| Satsukifujin 2008-04-09 ch 1,  | abuseThat was awesome!! Host Club poetry! ^.^ |
| GoddessMoonLady 2007-11-21 ch 1, | abuseSquee! This is brilliant. Just.. wow. I loved it! So clever! |
| natsumexmikan 2007-08-13 ch 1, anon. | abusei really like it, you should make this a proluge to a haruhiXall fic, i'd definatly read it, it would be an awsome fic,Ja ne ! |
| Kagegausui-Chan 2007-06-24 ch 1, | abusefrickin awesome! don't know if I've reviewed this one before...oh well! ^^ Best HC poem I've ever read! |
| TheHamsterInMyMind 2006-12-28 ch 1, | abuseThis... this was just beyond words in its cute-ish form of greatness. |
| Sunny38 2006-11-21 ch 1, | abusei like it. nice poem :) |
| TaShYrEi 2006-10-23 ch 1, | abuseHa. This was pretty. Oh, such a scandal it would be to fall for their daughter (Tamaki and Kyouya)/sister (the rest)! I loved this! |
| GoGothGirl 2006-10-10 ch 1, | abuseBut Haruhi entertained the ladies, never knowing of their hidden passions, while father, mother, and her kind brothers thought of how they’d break their “family” ties. They would have her one day, their peasant queen. I like that verse of the poem best. Oh! Such scandal in a family! You know what? Someone should really hit Haruhi on the head cause she's being a little too oblivious to my liking. |
| Rainy Days Should Never Fad... 2006-10-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseUm, So... I absolutely adored your poem! You pretty much rock. So, yeah. !... Just thought that I'd add a few exclamation points to get my point across. |
| RequiemElise 2006-10-06 ch 1, | abusewow! that was really awsome! i love the way you wrote the poem, it was so unique!^-^ please write more cause you are and amazing writer! -RequiemElise |
| howling pixie 2006-10-05 ch 1, | abusethis is good i like how you used poetry instead of normal writing. please you should write a norlam story though. going in detail this time. just as a sujesstion. (sorry i cant spell) (V) |
| Triste1 2006-10-05 ch 1, | abuseFascinating. I'm not usually one for fanfiction in poetry, much less free verse, but this was absolutely fascinating. It was easy to read and understand, with several easy spot metaphors and symbols. I can't say I know much about poetry writing, so I can't comment on the writing style, but all in all I enjoyed it. Keep writing. Perhaps next time it'll be written in common story telling style? |
| Augeas 2006-10-04 ch 1, | abuseI liked it! Especially how every character had their own... verse? (Is that what you call it? Sorry, I don't know much about poems). Of course, with the twins as an exception... Although theirs was shared, it was my favourite. =P |
| midori.complex 2006-10-04 ch 1, | abusePerhaps I am just being dirty minded, but that sounded kinda dirty! Good job. Nice use of repetition. |
| higher than sky high 2006-10-04 ch 1, | abusewhoa, i like it. xD kinda dramatic.. reminds me of medieval times just cause of "peasant" and "queen" lmao.. i think it's really interesting how they're all thinking the same thing.. wonder who would win ;P |