 Ceres 82.1 2008-03-27 . chapter 1It's one of the least funniest of the Random Bits, but Yuna..in a food fight..lol.
Your Random Bits fanatics,
The PW Guild of RolePlayers and Authors |
 munchinmonster 2008-03-25 . chapter 1This is by far the best random bit so far, it is just brillient.
a severly retarded dust bunny who's picking his nose, never has somebody given such an acturate discription of Wakka.
Also the way you have written Auron is just perfect, I love the way he bullies jecht's spawn.
munchin |
 heaven-monument 2007-04-29 . chapter 1do i even need to say anything?
well, ok.
L. O. L.
(multiply that by the rest of the 'Random Bits' stories from this one to RB1. i'm going in reverse order.) |
 machinae 2007-03-23 . chapter 1Oh wow. Hilarious! I'm really surprised you don't get more reviews because your random bits series is hilarious. This one had me in stiches, though. Seriously! I almost... pee'd myself reading about Auron's eye going all over the place and Tidus shaving his legs and other parts. :D Great work, can't wait for some others. Your recent ones have been excellent as well! Good ole classic humour. Nothing real dumb-funny.. It's just plain old funny! Good job!
~machinae |
 Dark Flamingo 2007-02-28 . chapter 1HA! Tidus shaves his legs XD...Strangely that sounds believable...
Anyways, that was awesome. I espicially liked the bit when Auron and Rikku were 'feeding' Tidus. Just hilarious. |
 runeko 2007-02-18 . chapter 1It was fun to read, especially the parts with Auron's new eye :]
I would like to see more of your stories. |
 rr1963 2006-10-06 . chapter 1Hey. Again, I laughed out loud, especially in the second half. Honestly, it started a little slow, but it built. The interaction between Auron and Rikku was unexpected...I don't think you've ever had them interact before. It was a little odd, but I think you advanced her characterization some...the mechanical monkey painted a vivid word picture. Yuna also, to a more limited extent.
Like I said, there were several places in the second half that I laughed out loud, even when I looked it over a second time for this review. Looking forward to the next installment. Take care.
(Chocob-Os...how did no one else ever think of that?) |
 lunartick 2006-10-05 . chapter 1U get giggles!! Lol!! So gross, yet so hilarious as well!! Seriously love your Random Bits series!! |