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Ceres 82.1 2008-03-27 . chapter 1
It's one of the least funniest of the Random Bits, but Yuna..in a food fight..lol.

Your Random Bits fanatics,

The PW Guild of RolePlayers and Authors
munchinmonster 2008-03-25 . chapter 1
This is by far the best random bit so far, it is just brillient.

a severly retarded dust bunny who's picking his nose, never has somebody given such an acturate discription of Wakka.

Also the way you have written Auron is just perfect, I love the way he bullies jecht's spawn.

munchin
heaven-monument 2007-04-29 . chapter 1
do i even need to say anything?
well, ok.

L. O. L.

(multiply that by the rest of the 'Random Bits' stories from this one to RB1. i'm going in reverse order.)
machinae 2007-03-23 . chapter 1
Oh wow. Hilarious! I'm really surprised you don't get more reviews because your random bits series is hilarious. This one had me in stiches, though. Seriously! I almost... pee'd myself reading about Auron's eye going all over the place and Tidus shaving his legs and other parts. :D Great work, can't wait for some others. Your recent ones have been excellent as well! Good ole classic humour. Nothing real dumb-funny.. It's just plain old funny! Good job!

~machinae
Dark Flamingo 2007-02-28 . chapter 1
HA! Tidus shaves his legs XD...Strangely that sounds believable...
Anyways, that was awesome. I espicially liked the bit when Auron and Rikku were 'feeding' Tidus. Just hilarious.
runeko 2007-02-18 . chapter 1
It was fun to read, especially the parts with Auron's new eye :]
I would like to see more of your stories.
rr1963 2006-10-06 . chapter 1
Hey. Again, I laughed out loud, especially in the second half. Honestly, it started a little slow, but it built. The interaction between Auron and Rikku was unexpected...I don't think you've ever had them interact before. It was a little odd, but I think you advanced her characterization some...the mechanical monkey painted a vivid word picture. Yuna also, to a more limited extent.

Like I said, there were several places in the second half that I laughed out loud, even when I looked it over a second time for this review. Looking forward to the next installment. Take care.

(Chocob-Os...how did no one else ever think of that?)
lunartick 2006-10-05 . chapter 1
U get giggles!! Lol!! So gross, yet so hilarious as well!! Seriously love your Random Bits series!!
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