I totally agree on that it sucks that all of the others had an episode about there first time, and Marco and Dylan didn't! I also wrote a fanfic about it :b Kinda short, but read it anywy if you like ;D And so far, your fanfic is perfect! Cant wait to read the rest!

ok so i read the 2nd one first but w/e. They were both amazing! I loved this...and I totally agree! We got gyped! They totally ignored everything but the beginning and end...and then beginning again...of their relationship! Nothing inbetween was mentioned...its like did they fight, when did they first have sex, was there jelousy, what were their other dates like?
*sighs* Its so frustrating. :) This was awesome, tho!!

That's what i call a hot fanfiction about Marco and Dylan ! Great sense of humour, and great story. I laugh a lot. I enjoy it a lot.

Charles Pelletier

I liked this story a lot...it was interesting...filled in the gap that we were given. Thanks a lot. Can't wait to see this Steamy Summer Affair Marco had! Looking for the sequel for sure!

Woah-- very marco like...start sequal soon!!

This is a very good story. It isn't too fluffy or too extremely angsty, any more so than Degrassi is in general. It also is more than just an excuse to write soft-core gay **, which happens too often in slash fanfiction. I like that you deal with Marco and Dylan's relationship. You characterization of other people is spot-on too. I especially liked the scene where Ellie is teasing Marco about buying protection.
I am interested to see what you do with the sequel to this. I felt the same way you did about the fact that Marco's first time was never dealt with. I also feel there was stuff missing when they got back together. Tim, for example, completely disappears. It seems like he was a convenient way to get Marco and Dylan back together, but once that happened they just got rid of him. I also would be interested to see the process of Marco and Dylan deciding to move in together, which I feel is a pretty big deal.
Kudos on a great story and I can't wait for the sequel!

I know exactly what you mean about not having any episode about sex! I was so upset! They went away from the season with no sex, and when they come back theres sex!! I don't get it! They said that Degrassi "goes there" but apparently, it can only go there with Paige getting raped, and Spinners hard-ons, and Manny's sluttiness, and Alex and Paige being all 'together' and more recently, Jimmy's inability to have sex with his girlfriend. Wait a minute...are we seeing a pattern here?
But anyway, I LOVE it so far. Tons of kudos

I can't wait for an update...

MORE!! I soo feel we got gyped...You're fixing it tho... **standing ovation* good chapter...

ps: did i mention: MORE!!

Great chapter...I really love this story. It's great the way you're filling gaps but staying true to the storyline of the show. Can't wait for the next chapter.

"though I wouldn't think that dylan was unexperienced."
The reason I did that was because Marco said himself in the episode Moonlight Desires that him and Dylan had only "been with" each other.

Wow..this is good. And I completely feel the same way about the total skip over what led to marco and dylan's fist time together. I love this story, though I wouldn't think that dylan was unexperienced.

Thanks for the reviews! I'll be posting the next part in a few days.

This is fantastic! Great intrigue and realistic portrayal of both of them...Please continue the story...I totally agree that it sucked that they didn't develop their relationship on the show...

I totally agree with you, Marco and Dylan should've had more screen time about this issue, and I'mr eally glad you're writing about it!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE post more ASAP!