That's really good so far. I especially liked your

nervous crewman and his memorization of Georgia's code. Keep on going!

That is an exciting. I will wainting for more, very anxiously.

I'll await the next chapter, but good so far...Harry is one of my favorite voyager characters, and no one writes about him much. I also like to see new characters in these fanfic pieces...so few people make up a person of their own, like you did with Amy.

Great Kim story...can't wait to read the next installment.

like it con't.

This looks interesting :) Please post more soon!

Hmm . . . good beginning . . . implausible if you're looking for hard science, but good. I shall read on . . . :)

Please don't keep us hanging! More! More!

wow this is really good, i cant wait to find out what happens to harry and if he make it back

Hey keep it coming. You have me hooked. I like the idea. I can't wait to read some more!

fascinating opening, more please!