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| Karen 2007-02-18 ch 5, anon. | abuseThat was wonderful...no more words can describe...Please continue for our enjoyment! |
| chili-peppers 2007-02-18 ch 5,  | abuseOh yey! im so glad you updated!! this is really good! great job! Cant wait for more! |
| MeredithandDerekfanforever 2007-02-17 ch 5, | abuseI loved it. I really hope there will be more Mac/Lindsay moments. Please post more soon. Brandy |
| MeredithandDerekfanforever 2006-10-31 ch 4, | abuseI love this story but are you going to have more Mac/Lindsay moments in here? Brandy |
| chili-peppers 2006-10-31 ch 4, | abuseHaha! oh briliant chapter! loved it! |
| ChocoBetty 2006-10-31 ch 4, | abuse*lol* That was a funny chapter, liked it. And I think I'm finally getting used to the switching points of view. |
| MeredithandDerekfanforever 2006-10-16 ch 3, | abuseI loved it. I hope they will be some Mac/Lindsay fluff in here. Please post more soon. Brandy |
| feenx 2006-10-16 ch 3, | abuseI love this story, it even got me a little emotional :). Great chapter. |
| chili-peppers 2006-10-16 ch 3, | abuseAw great chapter! loved it! good job! |
| ChocoBetty 2006-10-16 ch 3, | abuseOh, the first word of Mackenzie, how cute is that? I still struggle somehow with the switching points of view, but like I said before it is my problem. Actually I think a little bit of it comes also from the fact that I'm reading several fics at the moment. So don't worry about it, I'll be fine. |
| MeredithandDerekfanforever 2006-10-10 ch 2, | abuseOh man! now Don is dead too. I hope to see some Mac/Lindsay stuff. Please post more soon. Brandy |
| feenx 2006-10-09 ch 2, | abuseAW, Great chapter. |
| chili-peppers 2006-10-09 ch 2, | abuseOh wow! this is great i love it ,such a different story good job |
| ChocoBetty 2006-10-09 ch 2, | abuseFirst of all: Thank you for trying to make it easier. Maybe I just need to get used to the story idea first and than everything will be much easier to read. And it seems as if I would get access to it. I liked the idea of the flashback, though everything about 9/11 hits me very hard, everytime I read anything or watch anything. I just can't help myself, and I think I'm not the only one. You described very well. It's very interesting with Mac having two daughters: One with Claire and one with Lindsay. I like the idea of the daughter that the audience of the show isn't introduced to yet, it really works. And of course I love that the story is Mac-centered. It is interesting how you describe Mac. I think he is somebody with a lot of emotions. But he is good in keeping it inside. I think I would had never come up with the idea of Mac Taylor trying to kill himself. He is so controlled. But the only image we, the viewers of CSI:NY, saw of him is after 9/11, and you can hardly tell what kind of man he was before. And bringing in he has been sleeping with Stella for ages... Whoa! Interesting, very interesting, but it all fits together, it really does. Good work, very good work, and I'm really looking forward to read the next chapter. I think I got the concept of the story now and hope I won't struggle anymore with the shifting points of view. |
| ChocoBetty 2006-10-05 ch 1, | abuseI'm still a little bit confused and trying to figure everything out like the point of view. I'm not sure if it changes from time to time. But maybe I just struggle a little bit because I'm not a native speaker. Still I like the strory. I just love stories with Mac, I can't help. Hope to read an update soon. |