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violetkisses 8/2/11 . chapter 1
beautiful :)
anon 7/18/11 . chapter 1
wait, you're not human? OH MY GAWD I'VE BEEN READING WORK BY AN ALIEN! (just kidding) ;)
TheOneThatIsAddictedToHPfics 3/7/09 . chapter 1
loved it!
argona 6/11/08 . chapter 1
I love it.How your have written Sasuke's feelings and Naruto's is amazing and they are very in character.well done.
Mrs Hatake Itachi 4/6/08 . chapter 1
Nice story!
Hakumi-teme 7/16/07 . chapter 1
nicey! me likey!
XxBookScarxX 12/27/06 . chapter 1
I think you did well in portraying their relationship, I can see their sex being violent, everything between them before has always been violent and there is too much history between them for this to be any different. This is quite in character and I wish that you would write a follow up, that would be quite appreciated, thanks.
DMLpacker 12/25/06 . chapter 1
I'm sad at the spitefulness, but still a wonderful fic
Laie Himura de Fanel 12/14/06 . chapter 1
Hohohohoho...I LOVED this one-shot! *shivers* so smexy...dammit, Sasuke, you're one hell of a seme! I want you to do more things to Naru-chan! *drools*

Er...I like 99,9% of your fics...*runs off to read again Please, Teacher! X3
StarsOfYaoi 11/18/06 . chapter 1
well, when i read the summary i was fairly scared about what you were implying, but i love this shot! *huggles* (though, i like sai and i like sainaru).

i think sasuke deeming to try and simply forget, building excuses over excuses, is fairly cute, after all. he's so stupid. he can't forget naruto so easily, naruto would never let him.

as for naruto's ukeness (which i gladly accept since i'd never read seme!naruto) it was understandable, since he hadn't seen sasuke in years. (also, ukeness is ok unless it borders into uber!ukeness and OOCism, which your fics never do).

naruto can recognize sasuke anyway, so even if he comes henged as someone, naruto will always recognize him. naruto has a bond with sasuke that runs deeper than that.

also, i loved the range of emotions that run deep in this shot, and i can't help but love it (and have a -.- look at konoha who never realized sasuke was there all the time, and another -.- at sai).

thanks for writing.

SOY
solemnfatality 11/5/06 . chapter 1
...This was delicious :d

(and feels like a sequel is in order, but if one was made, it might be ruined? ::what would be ruined? i don't know...::)
TigerPocky 10/20/06 . chapter 1
You are SO AWSOME! People like you are the reason I have a computer!You should definitly add to this one. E-mail me if you do. (or for any other random reason that you can think of)

TigerPocky
ravemastaj 10/11/06 . chapter 1
Envy? Ed? FULLMETAL ALCHEMIST ENVY AND ED! AWESOME! I WUV YOU!

Er, back to the review...

It was a bit rushed, but, then again, who could remember everything that goes on during...that? Hehehe, 'that'...it makes it sound like a jewel that is just...that.
Konoko89 10/7/06 . chapter 1
Oh i liked it very much ... in fact .. i couldn't find anything wrong with it! You should definitely do a sequel .. make it longer tho .. of various times that sasuke returns disguised as someone else .. until finally they can get back together permanently ... (fangirlish sigh) ... with lemon of course! hehe ... hahahaHAHAHAAH (laughing insanely in case you couldn't tell ...
berta-chan 10/6/06 . chapter 1
gah! i started crying while reading the end, and i don't even know why. i really liked! i hope that maybe you could write one more chaper where sasuke comes back (hopeful smile) great job!-
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