This is great! I love how you described everything! Zihark x Illyana rules!

I would kill for a lemon sequel. Very cute, very well-done.

Lovely ! ^^ Waiting to see the whole pat of you work.

That was cute. I like this pairing a lot, and I loved how you wrote them. They were both in character, andlike how you gave them a cute little ritual. Good work!

fluffy! a lemon would be interesting, but in the game, dont they actually talk about aples? jk. i know what youre talking about. it would be interesting.

aw, I loved it! It was very tasteful semi-smut, which is really good and it made me so happy! I'm glad how you made Ilyana the one who initiates the make-up. Well, written. Short, sweet, and to the point while at the same time managing to create a lasting visual image. Again, love. Go you.

And if you do make a lemon, be sure to let me know!

Short and sweet. Thanks for letting me beta this; I really am working on getting those other chapters finished up =/ Gotta love the apples ;)