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Reviews for: On The Beach
LizzWeasley
2007-06-19 . chapter 1
Loved it. It was a great story.
Is Broken Telephone that game when you tell someone something and they have to pass it on exactly as they hear it and as it goes around, it all changes? I've played that once a few months ago in my french class, and it was in French what we had to pass around. It was fun..
Anyway, this story is also going to my Favorite's List... Loved it!


LizzWeasley
kaypgirl
2006-11-14 . chapter 1
Good story. I liked how harry flew again. Didn't really get the Gina thing instead of angelina. Great writing.
mokimik
2006-10-08 . chapter 1
very nice... sometimes a bit too american: gazebo, babes...

But very very sweet!

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connieewing
2006-10-05 . chapter 1
Hey I like it cool story.
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