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screaming phoenix
2007-11-19 . chapter 1
Not a bad story.I do have on question tho.If everyone was de-aged five years at the end of your last story wouldn't Kim eye have grown back?
Likekazam
2007-06-16 . chapter 1
aww this story is so cute. As I was reading the first one I kept on thinking that you'd make Shego younger, and here we are =]
Are you going to make a sidestory for a more deatailed past for Shego or are you just going to leave it at that?

Mizuki Ai
tanith-4486
2006-12-08 . chapter 1
this was awesome
Ace Ian Combat
2006-10-15 . chapter 1
I hope you aren't getting tired of this storyline, 'cause it's one of the most interesting I've seen in a while.
mouserr2255
2006-10-14 . chapter 1
great chapter Raven loved the part with the lil heart behind Kims new eye =^.^=
Ryncor
2006-10-13 . chapter 1
heh awesome addition! please write more. plleeaasse. this kimverse has alot of potential and oportunity so you should take advantage of that. of course take as long as you need, but you really should continue. its just too good not to.
DuffKilliganFan
2006-10-06 . chapter 1
As always, fantastic work.

Cheers,

DuffKilliganFan
RI100014
2006-10-05 . chapter 1
Very sweet.

Thank you for including a little daddy's day out in your series.

I thought this was very well done and that their bonding went hand in hand with my some of my own experiences with my niece.

I especially like this portion:

“ Oh! I got it!” piped up Ron.

“Have ih!”

“Huh?”

“Have ih, Dahdee! You zaid, "I got ih."”

“I – Uh…Yep, that’s right! I did say that. Thank you very much, Kamie.”

Kids :). You gotta watch what you teach them because they'll come right back and remind you...

Also I think you would enjoy reading "Kim Possible: So the Drama: The Resolution" by Jeriddian.



While it doesn't have the fantasy femslash of KiGo, it does give, IMO, a very close sisterly bond between the two former arch-rivals that just seems more fulfilling.

Thanks for the chapter again...

Till next time...adios.
King in Yellow
2006-10-05 . chapter 1
This seems, to me, to fit the criteria for what has been called 'high concept.' 'High concept' ideas are often presented very fast (as your three stories are) because the 'big picture' sometimes works better than the efforts toward small details. Sometimes, however, high concept ideas can be worked up in greater detail and do come out well. It might have been interesting to see how the time paradox could have played out in greater detail.
KiY
Charys of the shadows
2006-10-05 . chapter 1
sweet little one shot! x
Cyrus Majin
2006-10-05 . chapter 1
You continue to impress me Raven. Though I'm still curious about what Kammie would be like in Junior High and High School. Would she start doing the hero thing (much to the worry of her parents)? And how would she react to finding out about Shego and would she be willing to regain her memories of her previous life?
calamite
2006-10-05 . chapter 1
Not a bad story but not going the Kim Possible story line Kim Can't Cook without Ron's Help. But I still like the story.

Calamite
W0lf The Hunter
2006-10-05 . chapter 1
Way cool! Tis' Rocks! Seriously!

Dunno why, but this storyline is seriously cool... you sure have your way with words, RavenStar... spotted couple of typos though, otherwise exellent job.

(gold course should be golf course I suppose...)

Anything more on the way? Seriously, this NEEDS more!

Motor-Ed
Etherelemental
2006-10-05 . chapter 1
That was a really nice fic. Really sweet the way Kamie interacted with her family. Though, I'm wondering if Ron'll do anything about that gnome. Also, I'd actually be surprised if any of Kamie's classmates in pre-school and on would actually know about her being Shego. After all, Shego basically had dropped out of the news, mostly, when she went to jail, and that was five years ealier, about, and it'll be about another two before she starts going, which I think would be adequate time for everyone to basically forget that Shego was a villian. Besides, I don't think that everyone would fully accept that Shego was reduced back to her toddler stage. Anyway, aside from that, thanks for posting this. It was really nice. ^_^
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