Reviews for Not the Only One

Reviews For: Not the Only One

BellaBooTwilight 2008-03-19 ch 1,	abuseHi! The first chapter of this story was really good! But maybe you can connect the dots a little bit, like when Alex is mad, why? Even if you said that they tricked him, that is a regular occurance so how did they trick him, and to do what? And in what time period is this in? What book does it take pace around? Is he still 14 or is he older? Just specify a few things like that. Great job! luv, B.B.T : )
summersgirl2526 2007-10-08 ch 1,	abuseawesome
R1D3R 2007-03-11 ch 1,	abuseThis seems really good so far. You have an excelent writing style that I love! One thing a little annoying is how 'no' is sometimes spelled 'know'. I hope this fic isn't like those ones where Alex 'dates' a girl that is also a spy and is perfect in every way. On a lighter note, I love the thing with the sky reflecting his mood. It's like that for me except it rains when I'm happy, wierd huh? :D Update soon!
damn you gravity 2006-10-22 ch 1,	abuseI love it! Especially the bit about cartoons, I thought that was really funny. I was just wondering about the soccer bit when you were talking about Chelsea football arena, you could have probably done without that (sorry if that sounds harsh) But, once again, love it! Don't worry about it making sense otherwise you just explinaing everything a million times over (like I do, it's a really bad habit). Please update soon!
Bellatrix13 2006-10-07 ch 1,	abusereally, really good! update soon - pretty please?
snappleapple518 2006-10-06 ch 1,	abusesounds really good so far. i'll read if you write. update! snappleapple518
Leo King 2006-10-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseI think that this story is brilliant, you've done great at copying the style, and that's a hard thing to do. I like it, but there's just one thing. The Alex Rider series is English, and this is set with American language. You might wanna work on that

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