Darry Hicks = Harry Dicks = Hairy Dicks + Marry Hitler = Hairy Dicks Marry Hitler
Omfg I laughed for ages- that was priceless

I love the different entries. You really kept Barry in character. Great job!!

Is is just me or did you cross over Anime!Barry and Manga!Barry? Because Manga!Barry wasn't put in jail due to any sort of altercation with Ed and Winry and he also never cross-dressed, while Anime!Barry never chopped up more than five people, and he never chopped up the one guy behind the alley as his only targets were women (Ed being the exception).
I love this! This is just so...Barry! (I love Barry. He was a bit creepy in the anime though. He was tons better in the manga...but it seems like he's both in this fic so I AM HAPPY!:D) I can totally see him writing something like this, in both the anime and the manga. KUDOS!!

I thought this was great! I have to say, I'm obsessed with Barry and his cross-dressing madness.

Heh, heh. That was pretty awesome -nods-. I've never really thought much about him before now -- he just scared me at first. You did a really great job with putting him right into character.

However, the two short paragraphs at the beginning and end (where all the real action in the story happens) were a little tiring to read. Some of the sentences seemed really long and didn't have any breaks. You might want to try revising them so the reader doesn't get really tired right at the beginning of the story, or at the very end of the story. You started off and made me tired, then the middle was really good and got me interested again. But the finishing paragraph was like the beginning and ended a little awkwardly. It could be because there are some typos in the last paragraph and makes it seem like one long sentence (the beginning letter of the next sentence is in lower case ;])

You also might want to add some more action in the jail cell besides at the beginning and end. If you could capture the right mood, it would make it a little more eerie and more "Barry-like". It's only a suggestion, though - you don't have to listen to me. It's just what I see could be improved. ;)

Again, it really helped get inside the head of Barry the Chopper. Great job, once again! :D

OMG BARRY THE CHOPPER! I LOVE BARRY THE CHOPPER! WOOT! (Barry the Choppers comin' to getcha you know) I'm sorry, I'm a fangirl ^_^

that was so funny! captures barry perfectly!

VERY FUNNY! *favs*

YEY! GO AND HACK THEM BARRY!

:)

Pretty good.Very interesting.Good idea,diving into the mind of this...interesting character.

That was pretty good, and Barry was WAY obsessed.
You captured his mind perfectly.

i cant stop laughting!my husband greed has a verry blank
expression.and kimbley looks really scared!

barry the choppers dairy was fun to read out loud. i want to read it again but im being forced off .chop on barry, chop on.
write on writer of this story , write on.

honey flavored human bits... XD that's awesome