Wow. That was beautiful! =D

Bravo! It's just beautiful

So...was her arm broken or not? Because if it was, he couldn't move BOTH of her hands abover her head because it would hurt her. Just thought I would offer some constructive criticism because for me, it threw off the story a bit...

lovely story!

Wow, just wow. This is a beautifully created piece of artwork in words... this is the true meaning of literature.

Wow! When I saw this I had to read it. I must say: Very well written. You capture every moment perfectly.

How do I explain this? How do I put into words what you just wrote? The elegance of your words and the way thing meshed without faltering. You inspire me to write. This fan writing is unlike any “lemon” I have ever read. It held compassion and love, spiced with a bit of lustful desire. The desire that only true lovers know and want not some feral act most commit in the back of a car. It was a whim that both went with without worry of what might become of it. Though I do not know what the next day for the two of these youthful lover held I do believe that they took it in stride no mater what the out come of their joining was. Thank you for creating something of this nature worth reading.

...O_O...uh,wow...that was...wow...

WOW 0_0... Just wow...This fanfic was actually good. You captured the characters well...But what was the movie rated again!? LOL just kidding ^-^! I just didn't exspect to find one rated M; I did that randomly.Still, I have to admit, I did wish that something would happen between the two during the movie! You did well!

Wow, poor San.
That really must have been painful for her.
But at least they were happy.

Nice job *salutes* and I enjoyed it :D

what a lemon should be and how it should be used, great work and I really like the ide of putting these chapters up seperate to keep the main rating down, rock on dude(ess?)

that's briliant
i loved it

That was a wonderful story, I wish there were more like it, great job!

basically princess mononoke was the **.
you made it that much better

Oh, that was lovely! It was very well written and I enjoyed reading it. ^_^