This may not be your funniest story, but I think it's the best written. You're a smooth writer, and I love how skilled you are with words. Keep it up!

Really great start. This chapter was powerful, and Minako was just plain scary (in a good way). Can't wait for more!

this is really good. I've been reading some of your other stories and they are awesome too. keep it up and post soon please.
Avid Reader Hotaru-san

This story started out pretty serious, but you have a lot of funny moments in here too. I like that. It keeps things from getting too dramatic.

Really love the plot. It's original and that's hard to find in fanfiction nowadays. You've found a fresh angle and written it so well that nobody will ever be able to follow you. Booyah!

Really can't wait for more. Please please please update soon?

I just finished reading Roommates, and I thought that I'd check out your other stuff. I'm very glad I did! This is just as great. Minako is completely different in this story, but I love the way you've written her. It's like you captured one side of her in Roommates and another side of her in this one. Can't wait for more!

Whoa. I'm very intrigued.

Really great chappie. I loved it.

Fantastic. It is starting to become clearer and I can guess, with the help of the summary, what the comment "are they hers?" probably refers too. The other sensei are against each other, right? I cannot wait to find out why. What a clever idea!

Love the chapter and cannot wait for more.

WHOP!! Fantastic!! Brilliant! Bloody Brilliant! Alright, I'm deeply hooked - bring out the next chapter before I expire from wondering.

Well, knock me over with a feather! This was so amazing that I don't even have the words for it. You're such a powerful writer, VS, and I'm awed by you.

I love this story. I love how I'm completely in the dark about most of the plot, but it's so well written that I don't mind. most writers just give all of the important information in the first chappie, and then spend the rest of their time developing the story. You're developing the story, the characters, and the basics together, and I love that. I find myself reading every word, hoping you'll be dropping some kind of clue for later. This is fantastic, and I'm hooked. Thank you for updating!

Very interesting and captivating! I wonder who the invading army belongs to?

Please update soon!

~Kallie~

Hers? who? ah so bloody curious now.
so Serena is dead? which means no her?... I have a lot of questions about this I love the different view points Im curious of how it got to be this way the full story :)

Yay! Another story! *hearts in eyes* I think I'm in love. :D

This is really, REALLY intriguing. From what I've gathered Serenity/Selenity (?) is dead and the Senshi - or at least two of them - are rebelling. Are the other Senshi all dead? I thought they might be because Raye was saying how she had lost so many. And the enemy is...the Negaverse? Or maybe it's the Terrans. hm. But then I guess that Jadeite wouldn't be with Minako. It's awesome that you haven't told us too much of what is going on. I like it cos it's like a puzzle :) I demand more hints!

That was very interesting! Im full of questions like why is it like this? what happened to make it like this and will they really die?... :( really really like this

I'm glad you back!