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xtremekiiwii
2008-12-29 . chapter 11
That was so sweet! :D
UpperClassK9
2008-09-15 . chapter 2
You know, I'm NOT being mean or anything, seriously, but if Kurama looks like he does, and he's a slave, he's gonna be ...ahem, pretty unfortunate. So he'll actually be more... Depressed? I guess? And not sold off to work in fields, but sold off to brothels. Other than that, your story's pretty good. Oh, yeah, one more thing... KURAMA IS TOO MUCH LIKE A GIRL!!
Kitsune Krazy
2008-08-29 . chapter 12
For the sequal, i would very much like one BUT there are many sequals i've read or deleted myself because they just weren't as good as the origanal. I suggest you type out ideas for the sequal and write a few chapters if you like it continue, if not don't. After all this story had a great end so it'd be satisfactory even without a sequal, i mean it was great!! so yeah, just see where it heads, the worst thing in the world is a good author writing something for fans, not because it's what they want to write. It's just not as fun if you do that!! ^-^
Clow Angel
2008-08-29 . chapter 12
Aww.. I would have loved a sequel very much. It's sad to see this story come to an end. *sniff*
old worn out fox
2008-08-29 . chapter 12
Love Slave or Save Please I would love to read a sequel to this story I really hope you write it. I hated to see this one come to an end.
Thanks so much
enigmaecstatic
2008-08-24 . chapter 11
The Kurama rolled off line made me rofl XD I definitely enjoyed reading this story. You had some...chronological errors (the telephone, two way mirror, and japanese influence) but it's okay since you had to fit japanese people to the time. Anyway I think I'll go now and take a looky-loo around your profile. Good luck on anything else you're writing. ;)
JapanCat
2008-08-17 . chapter 11
Don't hate yourself for it! I know things that haven't updated in five years! (I don't think I'm helping.) I'm happy that you updated. I was really looking forward to the next chapter. I'm kind of sad to see it end though. I would want to see the sequel if you really want to do it. I'll definitely read it. But if you don't want to that's fine too. I'll still be reading your stuff. (I liked the part where Yusuke yells out, "Fuck yeah!" That was freaking awesome.) As a tradition with the end of everything I finish reading to the end, here's a nice poetic (Actually cheesy does it more justice) line: "With the carefully sewn feather in your hand hold it to your heart and let it go out on its journey through the wind. In the end, the journey sewing it was the best journey of all."
Yeah. I had to think on that... Well I'll see you around.
-Much love, your psych fan JC
Tearless
2008-08-17 . chapter 11
*clapping* great job. If your going to make a sequel, make another villian
and i'll leave it at that.
JGgirl
2008-08-17 . chapter 11
that was a great ending to the story! Cant wait to read your next one here soon.
kerbear
2008-08-17 . chapter 11
It has been along time but worth the wait.And a very big Yes to a sequel please.So much was left unsaid,Did Kurama stay a slave to Hiei or freed to be Hiei's lover.What about Kurama's mom and everyone else as well.With the crow gone theres alot to do with the new slaves he had as well as the property.It would be nice to see a love scene between the two as well.So much for you to decide but I'll be keeping an eye out to see how it goes.
Very nice job on this story though
flamemazoku739
2008-08-17 . chapter 11
i loved the ending and it is NOT corny, etc.

as for the sequel, i'd love it if you made one. :]
45animeluvr
2008-08-17 . chapter 11
YEAH AN UPDATE
love your story Slave or Save I am so glad your updated
THANK YOU
at the top of the chapter you asked if anyone wanted a sequel
YES YES PLEASE
thank you
Kitsune Krazy
2008-08-16 . chapter 2
I love the story so far!! Like the historic twist! :P
Gemenice
2008-08-16 . chapter 11
The ending was pretty good. And it's NOT crappy, corny or whatever, it was nice. I mean... Karasu was killed! And Kurama is with Hiei! That's what matters *_*

To the question, I'm for sequel... your stories are great and this idea is also... So that promises a wonderful thing. ^^ Nyan I'm looking foreward to it ^^
ladyasile
2008-08-16 . chapter 11
Nah, it was great. It turned out pretty good. I'm only sorry that I can't seem to write a proper review. ^^; Trust me, you definetely made my day with this.

:-)
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