I liked this story so thanks for writing.

Interesting story, i look forvard to the next chapter.. :)

that was an interesting chapter. Funny picture of Angel acting like a little kid, I wish it would have lasted longer

Ooh connor got issues, Emma got issues, I think conner should be punished though... just a thought

Good story so far. I'm glad Emma isn't evil and Reese is, he didn't really fit the story I dont think anyway

Interesting. The daughter would resepect the father, too bad Connor didn't respect Angel once upon a time. I think it would be funny if Angel was the father though, raising two kids both almost the same age. hahahahaha, Wow spike a dad... can't wait until i read what happens next

This story is really good. Connor is spelled wrong, I wanted you to know that. Connor is the irish form and Conner is the american form... i think. Good job though

I love this story. it is really good. I can't wait until I read more. :D

i know this story has been posted a while ago, but i just started reading it & i liked it so much, i really like connor & emma as a couple , i also like connor's new abilities , u really did a gr8 work in this fic , i will read the rest of it & review as soon as possible.

Hey, I really like your ideas. Excellent and very original and I know you posted this like ages ago but compliments are always nice, right? Just a little problem with the spelling, grammer etc but apart from that very good.

I've only read the first four chapters so far but this is REALLY GOOD! It's one of the best post NFA stories I've read. It's realistic and well written. It's very Angel like - I mean it matches what Angel's like. The characters are realistic too. Plus, the writings good and it keeps you hooked. I'm sure the rest of this story will be great when I get a chance to read it...but WELL DONE! I love it!
~Elledreamer~

Great ideas, and your characterization is pretty good; however, your wording and sentence structure needs some help.

“I’m saying that Angel Investigations may not come back and you shouldn’t worrying about a job, plus, your presence disturbs me.”

A better way to say this would be:

“I’m saying that Angel Investigations may not come back, so you shouldn’t be worrying about a job, plus, your presence is annoying me.”

This chapter had some interesting concepts, like Lilah and Hamilton, and the idea of the team starting over, so I may read a bit farther, but quite often I find I have to re-read paragraphs to try to figure out what is going on because the flow and wording is ackward. It is very difficult to get involved in a story when you have to work to figure out what the author is trying to convey.

I may read this story, but you already lost me on the sequel when you said in the summary that Angel dies.