i found my password! i wont be useing zeela9119 anymore and i do love this story.

it's ok if you like this kind of fanfichtion ^.^

i can't wait for your next update!
i heart this story. use their flames to make smores.

This is to phanatical...Girl(or boy), you really shouldnt be so rude! No matter how bad a story is, there is absolutely NO excuse for being so absolutely mean, hurtful, and rude! The writer of this story has feelings, also, and just think about how you must have hurt her feelings so very much! Please, next time you review a story you don't like, don't slash down the author, just simply state that it needs alot of work, and it would make the world a much better place.

You seem to not know what a flame is. A "flame" is not saying that you don't like the story. That's called criticism, honey, and for writing this story you deserve a lot of it. I will give you a more flame-worthy review for comparison. ;)

This is one of the most stupid "stories" I've ever read on ffn, and believe me, I've read a lot of crap. I use the term "story" very loosely in regards to this - thing - because there is no plot, no humor, nothing of value. You can't even spell "Raoul" correctly, which is hilarious in its own way. If you're going to go "fop bashing" and make yourself look like a complete idiot, at least spell his name correctly.

The only thing that is remotely grammatical in this "story" is the song lyrics you slapped in the middle of chapter two. Dangling prepositions, misspellings, and incorrect grammar abound in your "story." I would normally say that you need a beta, but not even the best beta in the world could whip this piece of crap into readable shape.

Congratulations on writing one of the lamest stories I've ever read in the Phantom section in this site - quite a feat indeed.

Oh, and feel free to send your brain-dead minions after me. I need a good laugh, and I'm sure their butchering of the English language will make my day, if not week.

You know, if you're going to write humor, you should actually have a basic storyline and not throw in random objects and expect people to think it's hilarious. There's a difference between fangirl stories and fanFICTION, which is well-thought out literary works created by an admirer of a certain story.

If you want constructive criticism, then I'll give you some.

For one, you should actually have a storyline. You're going all over the place, jumping to random scenes and throwing in various descriptions of what the characters look like and putting these descriptions in the strangest places in the stories.

For two. NO AUTHOR'S NOTES IN THE MIDDLE OF THE STORY, and NO conversations with reviewers. Do that in emails. Please. When I see random A/Ns at the beginning, sometimes middle, AND ending of a chapter, it immediately turns me off to the story, because what I am understanding is that the author is saying "I really want to talk to my friends, but here's a random story so they can keep reviewing." Nope. Won't read it.

For three. Eyeclarinet was not flaming. If you think that is considered a flame, you probably haven't been on FFN long enough to see one.

On that note, please don't tell your reviewers to send hate reviews to your so-called "flamer". If you want to write fiction, you're going to have to deal with some tough truths. I should know, I've been writing almost longer than you have been alive.

To be honest, you really could write humor seriously (sort of an oxymoron there, but oh well). The thing is you're not even trying here, you're just putting a bunch of random junk in here and expecting us to get it. Well, I don't. Don't be so offended by a slightly negative comment, because be prepared to expect a lot when you write.

GoM.

Ok, according to your friend SnarlingDemoness, i have said something to really offend you, and she called me a horrible cussword. She said that if you are just going to post a review that is rude, which i didnt post a very rude one, that i shoudl not post one at all. and she said that unless u are going to leave constructive critisism, dont write anything if u didnt like a story. I have some things i would like to tell u to maybe try to not do in your next stories,1, please dont use cusswords, i mean, no one really wants to read them,2, please try to make it more clean, and make it make more sensense. again, soory if i affended anyone, as i did your friend, who treated me very rudely.

ha ha lol roul got a biscut in his girly hair update i really like this story

chuchu Zari.My childe good work but where are ME AND LICI!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU!!?!??!?!?!? YOU FORGOT US!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!! In case you forgot in the title is APIECE OF WOOD! MEANING MEMEMEMEMEMEMEMEMEMEME!
WHERE THE ** AM I!?!?!?!?

i really like this plz continue i will most definetly read =D

Hello! Great job so far, and I hope to see you writing soon my fellow phan! :)

ok then.. i must say, i am NOT going to read any more of yr story...and i did not enjoy reading it...sorry, but i think it is not too cool.

LAWL this is hard to follow but hilarious!

I clicked it because I saw the word "firebending."
GaspAreYouCheatingOnZuko!?
WithANOTHERDisfiguredHottie!?
:o
leGASP!

Interesting...
Kind of... weird.
Random.
Hmm...

Would I read it if you continued it?
Mostlikely.

Haha...
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