that was a beatiful story! i read it in like 2 days(i have vetualy no life outside of school) and i cant wait 2 start on ur pirate story =3

that last song, did u make it up or did u hear it somwhere?(if u made it up that amazing!)

I love it, though I'm sort of sad that I've read it all. Makes me regret that I didn't stop reading yesterday :C
Anyway, I love the storyline! Since I like circuses as well, it just make it even better!
I'm looking forward to more fanfiction. You're a great writer!

ooh (random thought in the middle of reading, sorry. i was gonna read it all in one sitting and then review, but your a/n reminded me of sumthin) i know how to do the pretzel!! or i used to. it took so long to learn, but it's really fun! okay, back to reading. bye!! ooh great story btw

It has to be said that, despite my serious and major fear of Circuses (mainly Cl-clow- I CAN'T EVEN SAY THE WORD),I thoroughly enjoyed this fiction like woah! It was so entertaining, so enthralling so... everything you would actually expect a Circus to be like. I know that it's like over two years old, but reviews MUST be written for this fiction, and I'm sure my best friend who showed me this ficcie would agree.

I loved the relationships between the Circies. I think that they were written so well and I really got an understanding of how close they were. Especially Axel and Riku's friendship, they were so close and like... how you would expect best friends to be. Riku, hands down, was my favourite character in this fiction. He was whitty, charming, and just the type of person you would want to be friends with. I loved all the characters as well, but Riku just had me at “The rest of us are just as captivating.” AH!

I don't know why, but I was more drawn to Riku and Sora's relationship that Axel and Roxas'. I think it has something to do with I really wasn't sure whether or not they were going to get together or not, because they didn't until the end. And OMG I couldn't stop laughing when Sora was drunk and took off his top and started dancing on a table or something like that. It kind of reminded me of me a little when I've had one (or five) too many. XD

Then there's everyone's favourite AkuRoku. Man I loved Axel and Roxas in this. Horny little devils they were! And I love it! They seemed really close and comfortable with each other. What I find interesting about this fiction, though, is that usually it is the roles which are reversed. Like, AkuRoku is the pairing where they usually hate each other and then get together, and SoRiku is the one where they befriend quickly then get together. It was nice to read something different other than the average cliches that I seem to find.

Then there is the Circus itself. I love the fact that it was all enchanted and their acts reflected their personalities. OH AND I SO TOTALLY HAD KITTENS CALLED MUNGOJERRIE AND RUMPLETEAZER! They were a bloody nightmare! XD That just had to come out of my system. Yeah... the shows were amazing and I could imagine all their costumes and acts perfectly. I especially loved Demyx, and Squeed like a Banshee when he had to cuddle up with Riku because he was afraid (which just goves me even more reason to love Riku.)

:o and when you wrote that Axel wasn't going to make it, I like died a little inside.

But no one could kill off everyone's favourite redhead! So it's all good! I just loved the whole setting and everything, it was so realistic in a Kingdom Hearts world. And I loved how it ended, with Axel's little line. Just so fitting and... yeah... wow! Such a good fiction.

Well, I guess this is where I leave my long review with one last message: I FREAKING LOVE THIS FICTION! and IT WAS TOTALLY AMAZING! WHOO!

x-Jaela-x

This is a really good story. I've read one of your stories before - A Pirate's Life for us, though I'm going to have to read it again since it's been a long time since I've returned to the KH fandom. But this story is very captivating as well. I like how it started. I can already tell it will be great, because I like your writing style. It's a good thing to come back to after such a long time of inactivity from me. Very well written. On to the next chapter I go.

you have to keep writing this story! seriously its really good and i dont want it to end without another world being envolved and sora stubling around still on twilight time! UGH. you are really amazing and i hope you keep adding to this fic cause its great:)

yours truly, Leod

update soon

i loved it... you did great... and i still think a drunk Sora is hilarious lol...

oh my god a drunk Sora is so funny and i loved the way you described the circus act...

please tell me One in a Million is NOT from Hannah Montanna

Ya’ know I know you probably get this comment all the time but you are such a creative writer and you have taken this story across the universe and back and you still have had something to say and for that you get a standing ovation.
keep writing because you have thousands of people watching in anticipation for what happens next.
keep on writing:
Finial

okay I am going through your story again to get reading refference of all the circies, and i'm listioning to the music as it comes into the story. I listoned to the "show must go on" and...
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OH MY FIRCKEN GOD!
listoning to it as I read it nearly brought me to tears
AH! Poor Axel! Poor Roxas! POOR ALL OF THEM! SOB! SOB! SOB! SOB!

and again I finally got some free time to work on your circus (you know how free time can be few and far between even in summer)

Okay I'm being dead serious when I say that this chapter made me smile so much that my jaw actually hurt.

That NEVER happens with me, not that I don't ever smile at fictions because I do constantly, but I smiled SO damn much at this!

It was the SoraxRiku bit where Riku said something in French and Sora said "did you just call me a fat lobster?"

That had me <3

It was so Soriku! Okay, now I'm gunna say that I'm in love with Axel,Riku, Demyx and dare I say, Larxene!

Demyx seems fun and talented on intrusments, as well as a cheerful demeanor. Axel is cheeky yet caring and sensitive and Riku just likes to play around a bit and have fun! I like Larxene because she has her sneaky comments and she seems like a fun character as well as Demy!

WOT! Can't wait for the next chapter! this story is SO exciting and gripping!

I loved the last bit btw, the akuroku in this fiction is adorable <3

GAH!
This chapter was SO entertaining!
I loved EVERY second of it =]
Axel and Riku made me laugh on the train!! Axel is such a cutie! And fire wot! Okay onto the next chapter!