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Reviews for: Fred FredBurger travels to the land of MakeBelive
Evil Riggs
2007-05-07 . chapter 1
What do you say when a story absolutely confounds you?

This is pretty much impossible for me to properly review. I have little to no idea what's going on. Characters appear from nowhere and disappear within moments. Random dialogue is attributed to no one and everyone. If this weren't an obvious sketch you cooked up on a whim, I'd declare it a Dadaist masterpiece.

All that said, I DID smile at Trolley's obscene turn. Just a little.
Kairi Uzeniba
2006-10-15 . chapter 1
I LOVE IT! So funny, yes. Waiting for the next chapter, yes. YES. YES! :P
Homfrog
2006-10-12 . chapter 1
That wasd hilarious! Maybe if you tuned down the cussing a bit, it'd be a whole lot better! I mean, just one cuss gone, it's perfect! That was hilarious.
ShadowTheHedgehog92
2006-10-05 . chapter 1
Hilarious crossover :D
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