What do you say when a story absolutely confounds you?
This is pretty much impossible for me to properly review. I have little to no idea what's going on. Characters appear from nowhere and disappear within moments. Random dialogue is attributed to no one and everyone. If this weren't an obvious sketch you cooked up on a whim, I'd declare it a Dadaist masterpiece.
All that said, I DID smile at Trolley's obscene turn. Just a little.
I LOVE IT! So funny, yes. Waiting for the next chapter, yes. YES. YES! :P
Homfrog 2006-10-12 . chapter 1
That wasd hilarious! Maybe if you tuned down the cussing a bit, it'd be a whole lot better! I mean, just one cuss gone, it's perfect! That was hilarious.