aw...this was really cute!! i love the scene when he caught her reading, i just about died i was laughing so hard!!

I loved the "Did you get my book?" part. So preggie Katie!

does that mean you won't take constructive criticism? like, for example, "That was really awsome, but there was this one little thing that I think you could improove on..."
because, the thing about constructive criticism? YOU DON'T HAVE TO TAKE IT! it just might help you improove and grow as a writer. (cheezy, I know, but it gets the point accross)

anyway, I'm ASSUMING you won't hate me for pointing one teesny-weensy gramitcal error. Well, I'm going to do it anyway.
"volt" is like electricity. you mean "vault"

That was really great, and I completely agree with what you noted in the beginning, about writing being completely personal, and i think that if someone doesn't like it, they can just ** off and go read something else. Anyway, on a brighter not, this was a raelly cute story--you've got to love moody pregnant women! Lol, good job!
FM

I love katie and Oliver stories and this is so cute! Will you do another one please?

really sweet. please do another one

Loved it! Is there going to be another sequel?

I really like this one, and I'm adding it to my favorites.

the storyline in this was very cute. however i think you need to work on your style a little. vary the length of your sentences, and add more description and lessen the event telling. no matter what the subject matter is, constant: "he did this she did this. then this and this. and he said that" is disconcerting.

i read the note at the top of your story and i understand what you mean. bad reviews don't help your self esteem, and if your offended yopu are less likely to try and fix what others think is wrong. but constructive criticism when its given kindly should be considered as it makes you a better writer.

i really hope you aren't offended by this. because i did enjoy this story. the subject matter was interesting and beautiful, but i think you could fix up some parts.

cheers,
Arre

aw can just picture that story running in my head! Excellent! Will there be another one with the baby?

Good story

Lol, loved the last line.

Aww really cute, but funny too! Will there be another sequel when the baby's born?

aw, that was so sweet.

i loved how you showed a point in time not normally written about. normally it'll be like 'oh yeah, katie's pregnant...9 moths later...and they named the kid abby' or some jazz like that. you know what i mean? i hope you do because i'm trying to say you did a brilliant job perusual.

oh, and don't think i didn't notice the reference to the growing vocabulary, oh eyah. good times with alicia. lol.

well, great job again
lots o love!

i love all your Katie/Oliver stories! i've read the first two and i have to say i was soo happy when i saw you posted another one! i can't wait for the next one!