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| ShadowQuirk 2006-10-06 ch 1, | abuseNice explanation of Linsay's past. Although I did feel that the Paul dying in Linsay's arms were a bit cliched. But I did like how you tied it into Danny's hug. I'm really looking forward to TPTB's explanations to Linsay's 'Deep Dark Secret Past' - with all this speculation going on in fics - I really don't know how they're gonng find one that's fresh!! Just some thoughts. Keep up the good work! |
| chili-peppers 2006-10-06 ch 1, | abuseAw so sad! poor Lindsay! well done you wrote that so briliantly well done! |
| Tiantian Wang 2006-10-05 ch 1, | abuseDAMN! After finally seeing Danny and Lindsay going on a date, the episode had to end with them semi-break up! Oh come on, I mean they belong together. I am hoping tat do a kidnapping or a bomb episode with Danny being the victim and put him into a coma or something, so tat Lindsay would realize how much she loves him! LOL, maybe u could write a story about tat^_^ Great writing! |
| Ancient85 2006-10-05 ch 1, | abuseIt was very good. I liked it. |
| saturn567 2006-10-05 ch 1, | abusegreat one-shot! |
| The Awesome One 2006-10-05 ch 1, | abuseI loved it. Very beautiful. |