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| SaraHunt1 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abuseHi Squid109, I really enjoyed this story. The only criticism I have is that I wish it would have been longer. Keep up the great work! |
| ilexx 2008-01-14 ch 5, | abuseIt just occurred to me that... it's already been a while. Personally, I like the idea of a NIetzschean set-up best. |
| LittleRedhead 2006-11-08 ch 3, | abuseNice job Squid. I liked your take on how Harper joined the Maru crew. |
| MaryRose 2006-11-01 ch 3, | abuseGood backstory story. That does sound strange but that is what this story is, isn't it? |
| ilexx 2006-10-15 ch 3, | abuseVery original, very good 'How Harper joined...'-story; and a perfect introduction for him: the small young guy with the smart plan and aces up his sleeve when everything that could go wrong, goes wrong. And some great lines, too. Plus a nice take on Bobby and Beka's relationship. Thanks! |
| ilexx 2006-10-13 ch 2, | abuseI finally managed to read it throroughly, and it makes a great read. The characters - up to the Nietzschean squadron leader - are very well portrayed, Vexpeg being an arachnoid is... interesting (in a yuck-sort of way, as far as I'm concerned, but interesting) - and I like Bobby being neither too idealistic nor too self-concerned. And the plot is captivating, indeed! |
| Xeromem 2006-10-10 ch 2, | abuseI love this chapter. You captured the attitude of the old Beka perfectly. I also like Vexpeg. |
| Dybdahl 2006-10-08 ch 2, | abusenice |
| Dybdahl 2006-10-07 ch 1, | abuseplease continue |
| ilexx 2006-10-05 ch 1, | abuseLate night musings with hot chocolate... That's a great way to start a story (especially when there are nightmares lurking in the background)! More soon, please? |
| Xeromem 2006-10-05 ch 1, | abuseAlright a story about how Harper joined the Maru. I can't wait to see what happens in this story. That scene with Trance and Beka is a great way to start it off. |