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Reviews For: A Matter of Viral Resistance

SaraHunt1
2008-01-16
ch 1,
abuseHi Squid109,

I really enjoyed this story. The only criticism I have is that I wish it would have been longer. Keep up the great work!
ilexx
2008-01-14
ch 5,
abuseIt just occurred to me that... it's already been a while. Personally, I like the idea of a NIetzschean set-up best.
LittleRedhead
2006-11-08
ch 3,
abuseNice job Squid. I liked your take on how Harper joined the Maru crew.
MaryRose
2006-11-01
ch 3,
abuseGood backstory story. That does sound strange but that is what this story is, isn't it?
ilexx
2006-10-15
ch 3,
abuseVery original, very good 'How Harper joined...'-story; and a perfect introduction for him: the small young guy with the smart plan and aces up his sleeve when everything that could go wrong, goes wrong.

And some great lines, too. Plus a nice take on Bobby and Beka's relationship. Thanks!
ilexx
2006-10-13
ch 2,
abuseI finally managed to read it throroughly, and it makes a great read. The characters - up to the Nietzschean squadron leader - are very well portrayed, Vexpeg being an arachnoid is... interesting (in a yuck-sort of way, as far as I'm concerned, but interesting) - and I like Bobby being neither too idealistic nor too self-concerned.

And the plot is captivating, indeed!
Xeromem
2006-10-10
ch 2,
abuseI love this chapter. You captured the attitude of the old Beka perfectly. I also like Vexpeg.
Dybdahl
2006-10-08
ch 2,
abusenice
Dybdahl
2006-10-07
ch 1,
abuseplease continue
ilexx
2006-10-05
ch 1,
abuseLate night musings with hot chocolate... That's a great way to start a story (especially when there are nightmares lurking in the background)!

More soon, please?
Xeromem
2006-10-05
ch 1,
abuseAlright a story about how Harper joined the Maru. I can't wait to see what happens in this story. That scene with Trance and Beka is a great way to start it off.
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