i love your poems! although this one was kind of sad...

Aww that's so sweet, and thatnks for the review! =P

Alkira

Aw, nice poem. I think it really describes how Sakura feels towards Sasuke after he leaves, how she won't be able to let go. Good job!

Ay,

That was a good portrayal of the Sakura from the series. She's like on big sob story until she gets stronger...but anyways I really liked the end and when you said she tortures herself. Because thats so true, she really does it all to herself. I mean, It's not Sasuke hurting her, its her hurting her. She lets what he says get to her and wastes her time and energy dreaming and thinking about someone who clearly doesn't return her feelings. Its nearly pathetic. Like, in your poem, shes all over the place . 'I love you,you left me and I hate you, but im madly in love with you..ect...' and thats EXACTLY how she is!!

Okay now im ranting, so what I think about this...it was a little wordy and alot of repeated things and the overall idea was quite common but for some reason I'm still glad I read this. Good job. Keep writing, okay?

PEACE,

-autumn