Great monologue! Keep up the good work!)

Oooooo! _ This I like! _ I can see Quistis thinking like that.'_ Poor Quistis...:sniff sniff::

Write another; they're fun to act out...)

you should keep going that was cool! i really liked it!

That was good, very good. I think you caught the true Quistis most don't see in her-a young vulnerable lady who was forced into a young adulthood. *nods* This was a very good piece, You could have a sequal to thing you know where all of them have monologues. THAt would be very interesting. (and cool) _ Just a thought though.

Awesome job! The 'theatre' take on FF8 was a really, really good idea, and you executed it very well. I'm not sure that Quistis would be *quite* so angst-y at this early a time...but that's not really the point: you got the darker side of her character NAILED. Maybe in the future you could do more screenplay-type stuff? That would be really cool.

I love all theatre so i knew as soon as i started reading this that i was going to love it, but i didnt think it would be THIS good! I really really enjoyed it, you did an awesome job! I think you captured quistis' character and inner feelings very well, and i hope that you do write one of these for each of teh characters, i'd be very interested in reading them!)

I love it! It's so Quistis's-life-like! It's truely sad how depressing her life is...anyway, you're good at this ficcy stuff. Keep it! Hey, I wouldn't mind reding another chapter to this. Although a much happier mood would be nice. (Which I think wouldn't really fit in with her life during the game, but hey, this IS a fic right?) Once again, you're good at this.

Another! Most definately. Keep up the good work. Aw the emotion, I know how she feels. Not about SeeD obviously. That'd just be weird...