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The Cursed One
2008-09-03 . chapter 1
I think I just got myself a fever.
Also, I can't stop smiling. And I mean this kind of smile where if people see it on someone's face they go to the other side of the road just like the classic chicken.
Okay, now I can start breathing again.
X Piastol X
2008-03-01 . chapter 1
thats kinda cute! i love all of your fanfics with anticosmoxtimmy. and im glad you added the regular cosmo in here!
nice job, poppet!
Kalea CrimsonMoon
2007-12-14 . chapter 1
bloody hell! i'm new to FOP slash but that was realy good (it was fanart that got me into it realy though) i realy like this =3. its a shame its a oneshot though (you should write more of these anti-cosmo x timmy x cosmo fics prahaps a proper story and not a oneshot...) 5/5.
ZeebyHeartsYou-x
2007-08-06 . chapter 1
So I pretty much think I'm a total pervert now, cause I thought that was amazing. Just...wow. Marry me? xD
brokenpassions
2007-06-21 . chapter 1
omg I had to keep checking behide, so my parents still belive in my innocents.

wow that was the best smut I've read in awhile.
LOVE the ending.
DarkAngel10003
2007-04-28 . chapter 1
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I'm speechless(In a good way)
Pocketface
2007-02-17 . chapter 1
Holy snap! That was amazing. D; My heart's still racing. Ah, wow. Amazing job!

You've definately got a gift. Keep writing!
HitokiriKurisuta
2007-01-29 . chapter 1
Hmm. . . Interesting, and delightfully steamy. ^_^

Not a bad start, considering this is the first FOP fic I've ever read. XD I can only hope the others are as good. ^_~
sobato natsume
2007-01-01 . chapter 1
*nosebleed* Freaking amazing, omigad freaking amazing. Love it, purely loved it!
Extraintrovert
2006-11-28 . chapter 1
This is disgusting, vile, perverted, demented and all three hundred and sixty-two flavours of wrong... yet I can't stop loving it.

It's just so stylised and brilliantly presented that I'm able to overlook to subject matter and see it as a work of fiction, superbly written to form a volitile barrel of emotion and a mess of intricate descriptions that somehow collide to create this.

Yes, it is smut, but it straddles that line between mindless ** and artistic sex, and that makes it highly interesting.
The Cat is Scratched
2006-11-20 . chapter 1
Sexy.
kingdomhearts222
2006-10-31 . chapter 1
what the hell...? Wow...you should have made him atleast 14...wouldnt seems so odd then...
Amy Gora
2006-10-25 . chapter 1
wow I just cant imagine cosmo like that (my cheeks are turning red), awsome. i'm waiting for other
Chainlinks
2006-10-06 . chapter 1
That. Was. Hot.

*dies*

I think I've just fallen in love with you.
Exoticariesness
2006-10-06 . chapter 1
Wow. This be a once shot, correct? Its excellently written, I'm sure you're told this tonnes before, but its just amazing. I wish you'd continue, but then again there isn't really much to continue on, is there now? Anyways, great, keep doing these types of fanfics.
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