well, by the looks of the other reviews, i think peopple really like it so far! and i totally agree with them. great story, i cant wait for an update!

nice start!

love the sana banter.
love the details about what ana will miss on the island etc...

really fresh and interesting concept...please keep on going..this is great!

Yay! They all made it out okay! Well, except Boone, that chick who drowned in White Rabbit, and Scott or possibly Steve. Oh, and the 12 other Tailies the Others took. But yay!

Oh, Jack. So caught up in your stupid power plays to face the real issues, or even spend time to just talk to people, aren't you? Exactly the reason that you'll never truly be respected as a leader at least in my eyes.

Kate as ping pong ball! What a great metaphor!

I like how you went into the things that Ana Lucia would miss on the island. Even Sawyer's smart ass remarks! Hehe! Oh, and the colour of the water and the scent in the air... and (even though you didn't mention it) the millions of stars in the sky and the amount of light the moon gives off when it's full... I am here in L.A. and it could definitely use some clearing out. Though I hear Mexico City has TERRIBLE air pollution.

Would like to see Ana Lucia somewhat concerned about what would happened once she got to L.A., though. How she'd work things out with her mother and such. Mayhaps that's for another chapter? Still, I do like that she's pretty much decided to go with it and just wait and see how things turn out.

Nice little detail in there about that guy going back to his wife/girlfriend and trying to reconcile that with his relationship on the island.

Do I sense a little hint of Jana? I'm sure Sawyer will help
Ana Lucia get over it.
Oh, and there he is! Gotta love the Ana/Sawyer banter! There's nothing quite like it! Also find it very interesting that even though she seems to insist to herself that she doesn't want Sawyer sitting next to her, she still seems to pull him back every time he begins to retreat. Makes me think she really does want him...

Can't wait for more of anything you got, really.

missy42

P.S. Got your little note in my email, and I just have to say that you are the sweetest thing ever! As for me, I only have a limited number of Ana/Sawyer fics to work with, so I kinda latch onto any one I find. Can't speak for anyone else, I know that's my experience. Hope this was enough review for you!

hey, um i skimmed thru the 1st few paragraphs cos...dunno, guess it was just background stuff, so yeah.
i loved the part where Ana's thinking about life on the island and how she'll miss it. the stuff that she's gotten used to. i think it might be cos ive officially graduated from high school less than 2 wks ago and life won't be the same anymore.

i like the little details you put in like ana waving her hand and shifting uncomfortably in her seat...reminds me of how my eng teacher tells us to "show not tell"Like I didn't notice you smack my ass before I threw you to the ground," LOL)