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| Renn 2008-04-15 ch 1,  | abuseLOL. gotta love The Talk. |
| chibi Charlie-chan 2007-11-11 ch 1, | abuseahaha oh my this was great! i loved the whole awkward conversation with the parents, lol! and how cute was the mom taking a picture of them snuggled on the cough, hehe. this was nicely written and some good ol' cuddly smut ;D~ good job! hope to read more from you ^^v |
| mundanesociety 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abuseThe ending was particularly awesome. |
| Bone Orchird 2007-07-09 ch 1, | abuseHave I told you how much I love you?!? No, well... I EFFING LOVE YOU! ^-^ Another great job. Your everly devoted fan-Bone |
| Amarin Rose 2006-11-05 ch 1, | abuse*snerk* The poor boys, with the parents walking in, and the TALK... *snerk* |
| Sam 2006-10-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. That's all I really have to say. Well maybe not lol. I loved how you managed to get the appropiate kind of tension on each scene, and how you portrayed Billy's desperation. It was hilarious. Loved the "resolutely staring at the floor, or Billy’s butt, they were in the same direction so she couldn’t be sure" line. You managed to make me giggle in an akward moment. That's a little difficult to do in works of fiction, and I'm still amazed at how you pulled it off so well. Keep it coming, please! You HAVE to tell me (err... us) what happens after "Tedd-ooh" *grins* Please (please!!) do some more, and if you can do it as good as this one and the previous, I won't be complaining. |