I was skimming through looking for a Danny and Lindsay story and I almost gave up because the ones I read seemed to skim the surface. Yours shows their relationship in a more solid and believable way. They seem...real, and more invested in each other rather than in ones where they just seem like flirtatious friends.

I love it. It shows a real relationship and the way you describe what's needed to make the story whole really makes the story worth it. I love description! It matters so much to a story.

Thank you, eternally.

-shyshi

Okay I just had to tell you how much I loved your CSI:New York Fanfic The Greatest Fear. You seem to have a real grasp on how the characters act around each other. Also, you're not moving the Danny/lindsey to fast like some other fanfics that i read, but rather at a nice and gradually

Please write more D/L fanfics soon!

Sincerely,

Maia

Absolutely wonderful! I really wish this would happen on the show. Amazing job!

Lovely story. I just read it today and I love it. =D

Aw, that was so sweet. I'm glad Lindsa finally came around.

awesome start!

So good I love it!

Aw! so sweet! loved it! great job your an awesome writer!

Love it so far, please update soon.

Great story so far! Very intense! Please write more asap!

Excellent...can't wait for the other part.

So sad! Nice job!

Awesome first chapter! You make the reader feel both Danny's pain and Lindsay's pain without shortchanging either one's motivation.

So sad!

Great start!