so short! but still so sweet! great job!

Awh. I don't know if I ever told you, but I love pretty much all your Hyoutei stories. :) There are so many, written so well, amazingly in character, flowing nicely, just uber great.

I love this one, too. :)

And, I know it goes either way, but I must say I'm partial to double quotes, or whatever. "saying" instead of 'saying'. Ya know?

But still, great job!

-Dana.

why did atobe yell at him? sniff sniff. poor Jirou!

I like Atoji but I dont read it that much, but this surely made my chest all tight and fuzzy.

It's a good feeling, though. I love it. :)

Aw...Bad Atobe, yelling at Jiroh like that.

But, beautiful story. Like always. XD

when i read the bit about jirou's fake smile being fixed back in place (and it being the ugliest thing ever), i teared a bit T_T. yay for AtoJi!

Aw... ^^

They are too sweet. ^^

Naawh, so cute! ^__^ I liked it.

aww...so cute, it's weird, i go on fanfic at least once a day, and suddenly there is a page of stories i have never seen before... good thing your was still on the first page (even thought it's on the bottom) but yay for atoji! it's a little confusing though

Atobe and Jirou is my favourite pair from Hyoutei!
Somehow, no matter how much I dislike Atobe.. if you put him with Jirou, it'll turn out really sweet~
Great fic!

short but sweet...lovely!