That was beautiful. I lost myself within it while reading.

that was...incredible. There are no sufficient words. I love the end, how personal it was. How completely them.

AH! So KAWAII!
I love it! It's so romantic too *dreamy sigh*

So, so, so GOOD! There's so many good things about it, I don't know where to start.

Watanuki moving into Yuuko's house to live is very Watanuki-like. He would just over-react and do something so silly, wouldn't he? If you wanna live somewhere, I totally recommend Doumeki's place!!

And the last part!! I died from the fluff of it all. Loved their interaction and the first-name calling. Lovely. I can just see the scene, and I personally believe Watanuki's at his sexiest when he's wet. Doumeki surely won't be able to resist!

More please!!

You know, I myself wondered once - why can't Watanuki live in Yuuko's shop? He'll be quite safe there, but then I realize that'll cost him.
Very canon! Doumeki's so in character, I can see this happening. Good job !

omgs... so very canon, very doumeki! love the ending in the rain, how just saying their first names means so much. it so moving! please keep writing!

Excellent work. You have the characters, you have a style, and it all worked very well. :) Good job!

This is fantastic. I can almost picture this as a scene in the manga; you've nailed the dialogue, and the tone is perfect. I'm definitely favouriting this one.

KYA!
This is so sweet! The first Watanuki x Doumeki fic that I read and it's so sweet!

I loved everything you did about this fic, from Watanuki's seclusion to Doumeki forcing him out. And the ending line was so completely perfect. Thank you for such a lovely read!

It is a beauty of a moment. A moment between the two of silence, of gravity.

Rich with symbolism, I almost felt I should be crying. Except, I'm reading this at 5 in the morning...

Really lovely.