Reviews for Sins of the Fathers

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peanut2lb 2007-12-20 ch 3,	abuseI love how you are building towards some Smartie action. Sam's dream and Martin's comment about blondes were too cute. Elenor continues to be a refreshing character. It's not often we see people who stand up to Jack. Glad he understood her lack of professional dress though. Loved how Martin's comment "about who did you piss off" rang true. Can't wait to see whatelse Jack finds out about her and how things progress with Danny. Another great chapter!
peanut2lb 2007-12-20 ch 2,	abuseYou've done an excellent job of describing Elenor. Her pesonality is refreshing. Loved her t-shirt and the idea that she was on vaction. No work clothes, I'm with Danny. Don't think that will go over to well with Jack. I really like how you elborated on Sam and Martin's personas adding in the constants like Sam's name and Martin's father. Great job Maria can't wait to see where you take me from here!
peanut2lb 2007-12-20 ch 1,	abuseI know this story is old but better late than never right? :) Seriously, I'm in a WAT mood at the moment. Anyways, poor Elena...though if you are going to bring in a new character I guess a car accident is a good way to do it. Danny: Loved the banter between he, Martin and Sam over the photo. Rock paper scissors was too funny. Can't wait to see what he really thinks of the new agent. Jack/Anne. I loved Jack with Anne. Glad to see you've included that storyline. I wish the writers would have kept her around for bit longer. Sam/Martin. Nice tie-ins. I like how you elaborated on their relationship but have kept the door open for some 'smartie' interaction. Looking forward to in fact. :) Jack/Sam: Nice tie-ins there as well. I like how you captured their closeness. Jack's encouragement for Sam to try and rekindle things with Martin was awesome.
JPKisses 2006-12-28 ch 17,	abusethunderous applause Wow, that was a great story. I LOVE Without a Trace, and this story was just awesome. I'm glad I was able to read it all, I think I would have gone crazy having to wait for upcoming chapters. Very Good!
TheNaggingCube 2006-12-22 ch 17,	abuseIts not over... please!?!?!?!
hotchner 2006-12-20 ch 17,	abuseWOW! That was an AWESOME Story. I Loved the whole thing. Just wish that you had more Jack in it. Jack is my favorite character and I really Love it when he is in the story lots. As for Danny and Ellie I do hope that the relationship works out. I think that Danny needs a steady girlfriend. I kind of hope that they get married one of these days. That would mean that Martin would have an Uncle Danny. Keep up the Magnificient Writing. Can't wait to read your next Story. Hope you use Jack in it lots.
Luiza 2006-12-20 ch 17,	abuseI really loved this fic! and I would love even more if you write a sequel! would be great!
ninz 2006-12-20 ch 17,	abuseBu-hu! I'm crying! I DON'T want this stopry to be over. I can't wait until there will be a continueation! This was SO good. You're a real good writer, and there's actually not really much I've done... It was all you! :-)
ukeleleboy 2006-12-20 ch 17,	abuseIt has been a very good story, the plot was great, the intrigue about the relation between Ellie and Victor, the relationship between Danny and Ellie, the whole story is very interesting and well written keeping the authenticity of the characters we love in WaT. Thanks for sharing. I'm keeping reading your other stories.
anmodo 2006-12-20 ch 17,	abuseGreat end to a great story. I loved that you injected such a unique plot that involved most of the team. The Ellie/Victor connection made this story a great mystery as well as a great love story. And yes, I could definitely see a continuation in the future! In the meantime, please continue your other story. I'm dying to find out more about that one.
anmodo 2006-12-17 ch 16,	abuseLove that she trusts Danny so much. Great job.
ukeleleboy 2006-12-17 ch 16,	abuseWow, intense chapter... but we don't know what Ellie is going to do? Great chapter, update soon!
hotchner 2006-12-17 ch 16,	abuseWow, I thought that this was a MAGNIFICIENT Chapter. I hope that Jack can get everything straightened out. I hope that Ellie doesn't lose her job over this. Can't wait to read the next Chapter. Keep up the Fabulous Writing.
ninz 2006-12-17 ch 16,	abuseOh, hey! You updated! Good. I love this chapter (surprise, surprise...) looking forward to the next! :-)
anmodo 2006-12-11 ch 15,	abuseLoved Danny going to Viv. So natural. Everytime I think your story is winding down you add another twist. I can't wait to read more. And Danny and Ellie are a good couple. She's very strong. I like that.

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