You should continue this, plus I want to see Donna's mother's reaction.

cool story

This one story you've made had me laughing myself to the floor of my house. I love the Spiderman stories you've done and the AGU series is great...this one that pairs Donna and Kara after Peter was brilliant...but I have to ask...do you have a full lemon version of this somewhere? Because if you do, that will be great.

Well I kind of have to agree that I don't see this happening, as Peter seems to be the kind of guy that would respect them both too much to enter into a relationship like this. No matter what anyone says, sooner or later someone would wind up being the secondary spouse and it wouldn't be fair to any of them to put someone in that position. Plus, it's hard enough having one significant other, let alone two?
That being said, I must admit I would have liked to see you take this idea further. You presented it here with a serious mindset, not 'Lets see how much porn i can cram into the story.' As far as I know, there has never been a stable relationship like this in the comics, and it would have been interesting to see how it developed.
Now onto another subject. I have read quite a few of your stories, and as much as I enjoy them, your grammer is a problem. Don't worry, i'm not coming down on you about that. I also know that you are aware of it and what your opinion is of those who can't stand your spelling. My point is, as much as I've seen people complain about your stories and that you need help, I haven't seen anyone offer to help. I would like to offer to help. Would you like a Beta reader? While i haven't beta read before, I offer as a qualification that even with the bad spelling, I have been able to read your stories with little problem, and pretty much understanding where you where going. I hope that dosen't come across as insulting. Please let me know what you think, even if it's to tell me to f##k off.

This was certainly an interesting take if Peter, Kara, and Donna went out together. I really liked how Green Arrow and Flash teased poor Peter about it. His relationships, especially with women have never been easy. Plus, I liked how both Kara and Donna talked about the their relationship with their family.

The surprising part of the story was the ritual that they took part in. Also, how it ended was funny too.

Lucky SOB.

I would like to humbbly suggest a few lines to show what hapens during th Epilog of JL: the Spider in this version.

A unique situation, and one I think you handled well. I liked Donna's ceremony, and how she adjusted it to let Peter not be 'property'.

Hey Agent-G, it's been a while (about half a year to be exact) sorry about net reviewing any of your stories, but, well, some things came up and then i ended up with no access to a computer for about a month. Unluckily for me, you chose that time to go on a writing spree. So, from that point, i kind of stopped reading for a while. it's nice to know your stories are still top notch though, heh heh... and, as usual, i have nothing to say, i can never think when i'm supposed to, annoyingly enough

i kinda wish this had been part of the main fic, maybe you should think about continuing this as an au? in any case i hope you will write a sequal to this where they meet donna's mother. great fic, keep up the great crossovers.

What a wonderful AU of your Spider Justice story. I really liked that one and now, somehow, you come up with something almost better, in a naughty way. Even though it was a little short it did cover all the bases, although I would have loved to see how this would have changed that final battle with the "good doctor". Talk about him finding a "surprise" if he showed up and two powerful women "explained it to him" about the error of his ways...

Excellent one shot. You should have chosen this version for the main fic. Hm, two girls *drol*

This was a fun little story but there is no way that I am going to believe that such a relationship has long term potential. Eventually one or more will choose a favorite and that will inspire feelings of jealousy, unless of course that one of them is completely and totally submissive. It's just human nature, although that leaves out Kara since she's not human we don't know if she is capable of favoritism or not in the human sense. And there is no way that I am going believe Donna's Amazon sisterhood is strong enough to overcome human nature or are you going to say that Amazons aren't human?

Man, this is great! This is the story I was hoping read someday! A shame it was so short! :)

And I reiterate the opinion of other reviewer: Spider-Man is God. :D

Curiously, I think It could have fit in the "official" storyline of Justice League: The Spider, but I think it's better you set it in a parallel timeline. A three-way relationship sounds cool but demands much suspension of disbelief. ^_^

Nonetheless, they had a good chemistry. I could imagine this actually happening.

May I give you a suggestion? Write a smut fic based on this fic. I think it can be really good. Of course, wether you like the idea or not, you won't have time to write it -or anything else- down for the next several weeks.

I'll look forward to your return. Good luck, pal. You rock. :)

Lol lol very good, I always wondered what would have happened if they had gotten together:)

Though you have to add more to this, especially what happens when Peter returns to his own dimension-I especially want to see his old friends reactions to this predicament!:):):):)

does this have to be a oneshot. I'd like to see a full story out of it.