It doesnt suck. I really like it. Your voice is really defined and the plot nice and gentle. Very good job.

I think it is beautiful.

Nicely done

I thought that was a really nice one-shot. I love RoyXRiza stories and I thought this one was pretty sweet. Keep up the good work! -Mai ^_^

I liked it. The ending seemed a bit fuzzy, but their reactions seemed perfect. They both wanted to take part in the setting of the night (and what the night was rumored to be) but they both tried to keep themselves reserved.

I can see Havoc now losing bets with their coworkers about how this "date" went.

I did like it. Very well done =)