love it!

Woohoo! A sequel! This was another cute Blake/Tori fic! I love how you have them press their foreheads together. Since they're so similar in height, that wouldn't be awkward either. Haha. I wonder if Hunter really did record them on his camera phone or if he was just messing with his little bro. Hehe. Blake and Tori just can't seem to keep their hands off each other, can they? I loved this exchange: "Ha-ha. So are you hungry? Thirsty?" "No, are you?" "Only for you. Hey, I'm not gonna lie." "It's not that, it just sounded..." "Cheesy?" "Yeah, a little. But coming from you, it's alright." That made me go "Aww!"

On a bad note, I did catch some spelling errors again. "Than from the other side of the room came in all to familiar voice with a few snickers, 'Yeah, kind of in public bro.'" Be careful about distinguishing between 'then' and 'than'. Also, watch out for 'in' and 'an'. Lastly, be careful about 'to' and 'too'. I'm not nitpicky...no seriously, I'm not...I swear!

Regardless, weighing out the pros and the cons of this fic, the pros far outweigh the cons. Thus, two thumbs way up from me!

Good.

omg. loved it!
so cute :D

again...everytime i read this it gets better and better. :D

Good fic. Blake-Tori fics are hard to come by nowadays, and yours just made my day. Good job with the characters, and you them quite well. Keep writing!

please udpate soon

Good job on this chapter. Good job on keeping them in characters. You did a great job on writing it and keeping everyone in character. I hope you write more stories of these two.