Brilliant!
Ab-SO-lutly brilliant! You have captured the inner-fan-girl quite well. I have no real helpful hints since this fic is so short. I very well liked how you wrote Cait Sith's accent I could hear it right inside me head!

Keep up the writing!
'Specialy on Volte Face!
>.< Over and out!

Funny. Though truefully Lissa that sounds like our luck... *reflects back...* and like something we would do... lol

Ah ha ha! This was a very nice little piece. I must admit I feel sorry for the random DG soldier and Vincent-but-not-THE-Vincent WRO soldier. You nailed Cait Sith's accent and personality perfectly, as well as the fangirl's. Kudos on not making her a complete imbecile, as many anti-fangirlism authors are wont to do.

A very nice addition to the already dwindled DoC fandom. Nice work!

Lol, this was funny!
Yay, new fic from you...but please try to update Volte Face too, okay?
Yeah, why don't you do a series of one-shots for everyone else as well? Like Sephiroth.
Ok, I know I'm a fangirl, but I am NOT as desperate as Pim...I'm not.
So, think about writing more, if you can, okay?
-Rain.