12 minutes? That was written in only 12 minutes? Shoot, I'm impressed. Usually something like that would take me around an hour (reread, edited, recheck.)

I especially liked the first paragraph; very descriptive. =D

Oh dear gods... Poor Sephy!

hahaha!Cute! Aeris's version of heaven? Poor Sephy! That was really good. A tad confusing to begin with but very detailed! Please write more stories like this! Did you get a good mark for this? I hope so!

I enjoyed it a great deal. It's a pitty that it's so short.

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh the irony... Great one Oka-san. I've always hated Sephiroth for that, and seeing it turned on him like this is just too hilarious and satisfying.