A bit confusing, as it was hard to see the difference from speech and action. Nice enough. Things happening a bit sudden.
Nice Job anyhow

- Akuma

Ooh, I'm not entirely sure what to think of this, but it's very interesting. I like the surreal feel of it.

You didn't put any " for dialogue. That was a bit confusing also, and who was saying what. But OMG that was an awesome short fic. =) I was looking for a good Hitsuguya one with Aizen in it. Thanks for the good read!

Powerful. 9/10 Great.

shiro-chan doesn't really die does he? well, i knew it would happen sometime TT all my favorite characters have to get killed...wonder why...

omg great story though! it's really...just...!! XD i can't put it into words, lets see...

magnificent, no, not good enough...really, really super-freakin'-awesome...--;

Morbid, creepy and disjointed... your tone works well, but I think it's a hard job to write Aizen as a fallible, human person when he never seems like that in the manga. Still, good story!

Great! You blend together what one accepts from Aizen and what one doesn't. A wonderful look inside of the heart. Good job.