it took me forever to read the last chapter. which was a major cliffhanger! Poor Dom and Rogue. Stupid Cable, he's always leaving. Maybe he will have a good reasong in the sequal. Ur stories are the best!

Great chapter! Sorry for the late review but french exemes are a bitch! Anyways the chapter was so romantic yet like rogue said it did gave an apocaliptic feel.
I can't help but to feel like something bad will happen to Pyro but they will indeed overcome Sinister and all.
I'm very very happy with the couples, they all evolved nicely and I can't wait for the next story and to see what will happen with them.
I can't wait to start reading the next story.
Talk to you soon on MSN

X and Pyro's conversations are always great! ^_^. Yay Sage for being prepared! ^_^

MISTAKE!
"Ah’m pretty Sage would kill me.”
^_^

D= Remy! COME BACK!

No! =[

Update the new fict, zon! Or... I'll go over to your place and slap you silly!

eek...was a great fic... cliffy much... hope you'll post the next fic soon... i mean really soon, i enjoyed the fic...loved it!

Oh my! It's over! It's really over!

But there's a sequel! YAY! It sounds so far off though, Three Years Later. Is that three years from where this one's left off, or Three Years from when Rogue first joined the team?

I'm so sad Gambit left. He better come back. Cable, too.

I was just wondering, what were you talking about in the disclaimer? I'm afraid I don't really follow the comics. I've tried before, but there's really nowhere close to me that sells them and my mom won't buy them on the internet for me...

Anyway, great chapter. My favorite part was X23's insistance that John's not her friend, hahaha.

Can't wait for the sequel! I'm sure it's gonna be awesome.

That was good. Remy is so mean, so Cable. They just leave Dom and Rogue. Can't believe the two of them aren't going to see their boyfriends in like another year! Thanks to Sage people won't see the legacy virus. I think Rogue is going to turn evil cuz Remy is evil. You took how Wanda was insane from the House of M. So she's going to warp reality or something right? Is Sinister going to have a crush on Rogue again? Is Wanda going to actually learn how to use her real powers over probability? Loved it. Hurry up and post the next story!

X is so in her element! The scene with her and Pyro, then Pietro was right on! *giggles* They're friends now ;)

Remy going off on his own ... again. No good will come of this.

Mrs. Allerdyce! AWESOME! That almost makes up for whatever bad things I'm going to read when I scroll down.

Dammit Destiny! Why'd you have to go and tell stupid people what you see or write stuff down or whatever? Now Wanda's going to develop a complex and the Scorned have to fight against fate.

Wow, Sinister told Sage she was wrong. He has some hurtin' comin'.

I liked how you kept Sinister as a scientist first, megalomaniac second.

Iceman and Pietro? I can see Pietro, but Bobby? Does he really have the stuff?

Kind of an anticlimactic ending, but I can tell it's building up for something even bigger next time.

Wow, first of all awesome job and thank you for writing such an awesome story. You can seriously say that you're one of the few people on this site with a totally original and creative idea. Everything from your cast of characters to your weaving plot lines stands out so much. And I know this story is practically your baby when it comes to all your works, and I can honestly say that its your best one. Awesome, awesome work! :D

And now, seriousness aside. I must scream. GAH! Gr. Growls. Scowls. Glares. Falls over. Screams again.

How did I know those two idiots would end up pissing me off again?!?! HOW?! God, oh yeah, that's right Nathan thinks he's JESUS! Stupid messiah man. At least Remy left reluctantly. Nathan just thinks he always has to sacrifice everything for the greater good. The jerk. *slaps Nathan* He better have a damn good explanation next time I see him or there's a gunna be some whoop ass.

Okay, Pietro/Pyro/X23 WINS. Wow, that was like the greatest thing ever -- I laughed so much. I loved how the boys were kinda taken back by X's kill frenzies...especially when she just killed the guy right next to John's face. It was all very in character. She's such a little soldier when she's needed, and I loved how even though she was paying attention to the well being of both Sage and Pyro when she needed to, she never once let her guard down. You portrayed that very well! Also, I loved her reaction at seeing Pietro, and John's teasing. Such good banter you had going there. Also, I loved Sage's reaction to Pietro and how she was definitely okay with his being there, but was very lukewarm about Bobby. She never ever forgets what the X-Men did to her, and I love that she wants to fight without them.

I loved how Rogue stood by Betsy and all of her musings during that. Because it is true, the girls stand by each other and balance one another out. Because I'm pretty sure there would be a lot more dead people if they weren't there to stop each other! But on the other hand, I was glad that Betsy was still able to hand Sabretooth's ass to him and get her revenge. I love when Betsy and/or Sage fight because they are just so kick ass! And Dom too! Because they don't rely on their powers to fight, they just whoop a whole ton of ass! I love it.

As for Remy and Rogue, god that was sad. I had such a bad feeling it would be my Gam Gam too. :( My poor Remy always gets himself in so much trouble! I'm glad that you didn't have him go all bat shit and just turn bad because he wanted to. And now we also know there's probably more to Gambit's past with Sinister...he seemed so genuinely upset and remorseful. >:( I hope that he is able to redeem himself and gets back to his place where he needs to be! He said he would come back, dammit! God, that just depresses me. My poor favourite character. :(

*DIES* Oh my god, the whole Wanda section I kept going back and thinking of our conversation about her and Sinister together. And then him wearing a pink apron. Oh my god. *falls over laughing* Luckily I was able to contain myself and finish the section. LMAO. I'm also guessing that there's a huge spin to Dom's creation story coming up. The small hints you're dropping have me so intrigued to see what you have in store for her! And I'm assuming since Maddy's here, we're going to have some insight on what became of Jean, Scott...and some more background on Cable too. Which'll be cool because stupid messiah man needs some more spotlight ;)

Also, I squeed with glee when I saw that Jonda ends up married. Hee. Yay for them :)

The bickering amongst the team within the last few minutes was a nice contrast to the gloomy situation they were facing. Amongst all the angst and heartbreak they can still snap witty remarks, lol. They must do it to motivate each other XD I'm not complaining about it though, they crack me up XD

So lastly, I am now gonna take a stab in the dark and say that Pietro and Bobby are going to be joining? ((FINALY!)) This is good, even though its at a bad cost. But still. Having them around will help the two younger girls get through what they went through. Although I don't think that this will help Rogue or Dom at all. In fact, I'm quite worried as to how they will handle this. :S

So yeah, I'm totally pumped for the sequel now! And the prequel too since who you told me is showing up! *dies* Oh god, I'm so excited! But at least I'm forming coherent sentences this time. ;)

Awesome work, and I hope you're able to get the next part out soon! :D

Kristen

Such a sad ending. If you hadn't already told us that there would be another story I would be really mad at you right now but since there will be a sequal I guess I will just have to wait and see what happens! Can't wait for the new story!

AW! Man I so can't wait for The Scorned: Three Years Later to start! Great ending, great but sad. I almost cried...ALMOST. But it was still great!

Til Next Story

~Juno

Oh god! This fic was amazing! Can't believe Remy left though, but i know it'll make the sequal better! Can't wait for the sequal now!

AH! Last chappie. *sobs*. but still, another fic to come eh? makes me sad AND happy at the same time =]

How could you? You just had to leave a cliffhanger didn't you. Hurry up and update the last chaptetr, I'm dying to know what happens. I cannot wait. I love how Bobby and Lorna worry for each other. I loved the part when X threatened to kill John if he told the team she saved him. But John is pretty useless if he doesn't have a source of fire. Didn't he die from the Legacy virus in the comics? I love the line "I'm bloody fine The man on the other hand is about to be put through world of misery" Betsy said, I'm still laughing. Who's the Scalphunter? Is he bald? Quickly review, I cannot wait! Don't be late!

Hey lookie, you updated this chapter on 7-7-07! It's almost a week since you last update too, zon! Oh no! Wanda went off on her own! D=! What's to happen... O_O. *Slaps*

"love you like a promise not to commit suicide"
Love is promising not to commit suicide. ^_^

Aw, Pietro and Bobby followed! ^_^ That's cute.

*Goes read the next chapter*