I couldn't help but laugh at the part about Roxas being a 'nobody'. And you didn't evne mean it! XD

I have to say, though, that this is the most orginal plot I've seen yet for this pairing. The whole chapter had some very nice details, you seemed to get all the characters right, and the introducation of them all was wondeful! I'm quite anxious, actually, for the next chapter.

-B

this is one of the better stories ive seen lately. next chappy please

OMG I DIDN'T KNOW YOU WERE GAY! DID THAT GUY THATWASAPERVERTWHOICAN'TREMEMBERHISNAMEISITDAN? MAKE YOU DO IT? It's very good. I can totally relate to this. I am in love with a jock. GOD, DAMMIT!

hehe such a great start!
i would love to here how this one folds out!

Oh great story! Must continue soon! Or I'll eat your guts. ^.^

Tis Mahotou O_o on my (VERY)uber old account that will read your stuffz.
(Sora's hair ** off his science teacher! =D Yayz!)
Prof. Leonhart O_o *dies* he's a Prof!
ok yes! Description **! =D

OMG! THAT WAS SOO AWSOME! can't wait til the next time. i wonder wat will happen next ^_^ i'm surprised Axel knew him ha yaoi is sweet bliss to my ears and heart -dances- good job

X33 I love this so far DR-kun!!

Thou must continue this story as soon as possible. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! XD I'm really enjoying it, so I'm looking forward to seeing it finished.

it look great xDD nicely done too ^^ keep up the good work, i will be waiting for your next chapter -throw lots of KH plushies-

RikuNaminé and SoraKairi as side pairings when you choose AkuRoku as main? Just why?? It's really the first time I read a fic where the main pairing is akuRoku but RikuSora isn't a side one. Can't say I like it. RikuSora is like, the first pairing any yaoi fan should think about! XD Well, ok, you never said it wasn't going to turn like that, but still!

Other than that, well, High School fic with the poor not so popular guy hopelessly in love with the popular one isn't that original, and Axel as the most popular guy is kind of strange.

Well, other than that, your chapter is long and your writing skills are good, so this has potential. If you could just try to put some originality (and RikuSora!!XD) in it, then it could be really good.

Good luck! Ja ne!

Nya~
lol amusing XD hope you update soon. roxas has an obsession