Beautifully written. You captured the image and moment perfectly. Great job, you're an amazing writer! :)

ah, that's nice. think I could see this picture?

Hey..

It isn't often that you find things that could so easily be carried away, executed with such strength and control.

Loved the subtlety and the nearly tensile atmosphere, the hushed words and the soft touches.

The ending drove the point in perfectly.. Thanks for the great read ^__^
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Nicely written.. but isnt Hina supposed to be in a coma during the war? I think... Please correct me if am wrong..

now that was what I like to call powerful. It truly, truly does capture what might come to pass in the mangaverse (in the distant, distant future). The image of Hitsugaya sitting there, defeated, spent, cradling his head, in the dark of his office where no one could see...that was a beautiful, poignant image. The fine tremor that ran through his, how tight his grip was, all of those details paint a wonderfully IC picture of Hitsugaya, because, let's face it, people, Hitsu-chan is one of the most intense characters Bleach has.

Perfect!
I love this one like all that you write Davan. The final moment is so emotive... I liked it too much!

A very good scene for a little fic ^^ I hope that you continue writing things like this between story and story or... chapters.
I'm glad to read another hitsuhina from you.

More good stuff from Davan, no surprise. Naturally, that's all well and good, but I wish you'd just finish Awakenings... Then again, I know how things like that are. I'd rather have a good final chapter than a rushed one. Take your sweet time.

And keep churning out nice little fics like this one in the meantime.

Nice,
Rex

Aw. How cute. HinaHitsu!