Hi I am Moongazer! Well it could be good, not to offend you or anything, but there is manny thing you can change. here is some friendly critticism. Well, no parents would leave six years old at home, I haven't seen such careless parents. Well, and why would Peter play in the toilet. Um, excuse me, but he is not two, yeah they are a bit mysterious and thick head, but play in the toilet is way to imature, maybe they could throw the crackers in the bathtub, and let the water run seing what trouble maybe. Oh yeah, I am not sure if all them met, plus Sirius's parents are really strict about what children he plays with so probably not sirius. Well, I am not trying to be mean, but I am trying to help. I would see your story form o.k. to exxcellent, just change the minor things I pointed out, and everything will be great. Oh yeah if you have time please read and review my story, please. cheerio!

lol!
ah i love the young marauders
thay are so cute and mischivious
ah yew have to write more!
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LOL!!
That sounds like something that would happen to Peter.
*Shakes head*
Hand in the toilet...honestly!! :P
Anyway, really funny!
Please uodate soon!!

~A