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FallenTeenHearts
2009-09-24 . chapter 9
I haven't read a fanfiction in so long, let alone reviewed one but I'm glad I decided to read this one.

I love how you've used a lot of the DC characters and not only the Titans, as well as the way you've portrayed Kori. The Roy/Kori/Gar friendships are fantastic, even the little bit with Lane :)

Can't wait till you update.
Star of Airdrie
2009-06-19 . chapter 9
hope this wasnt completely abandoned - its pretty good - please update if you are out there
chicagobabe
2009-04-18 . chapter 9
hey update soon plz :D
its a nice story
chicagobabe
2009-04-18 . chapter 5
o this is gunna get intrestinf
hehehe
chicagobabe
2009-04-18 . chapter 1
o like this story so far.
diffrent :D
Watermelon
2008-07-16 . chapter 4
Yoyodyne? like Buckaroo Banzai Across the eighth dimension Yoyodyne?
Crimson Black
2007-08-26 . chapter 9
This story is pretty awesome and i'm loving the plot. I just wonder if you're going to have something more major stand in the way of their relationship other than tabloids. It'd add a large amount of excitement/drama/action to your story.

I wasn't expecting them to hook up with each other so quickly, especially with their competitive personalities, but either way it seems to be working out.

Your writing style was also executed very well, which certainly enhances your story.

So please please please update ASAP!
puppyeyes135
2007-08-15 . chapter 9
OMG!This story was soo awesome!PLEASE UPDATE NOW!FAVORITE!
jerseygrl90
2007-08-14 . chapter 9
damn, there really wasnt any kori this chapter was there? huh, oh well maybe next chapter. i really love this story PLEASE update soon!:)

~Christi
jerseygrl90
2007-08-14 . chapter 8
great chapter! awesome! off to read the next chappie!

~Christi
StarryNightT
2007-08-13 . chapter 9
your welcome for the review. i was afraid you'd lash out and bite my head off for my critique ((i've seen it happen before to my friend when she really didn't have anything horribly bad to say at all)) but i'm glad that i apperiently had no worries ^_^
sorry about the gotham/california thing! i totally got it mixed up in my head which is odd for i don't know why. perhaps because the conversation was with rachel and gar rather than kory and dick? i dunno.
anyways good chapter! i'm looking forward to dick and kory's first date ^_^
until next time

~Shelly~
Rochelleteentitan
2007-08-12 . chapter 9
I have a feeling that there is going to be a HUGE blowup for Dick to deal with. : ) Awesome chapter and can't wait for the next update!
chittychittybangbang16
2007-08-11 . chapter 9
Your story has inspired me. That's a good sign.
StarryNightT
2007-08-09 . chapter 8
hello! i think this is the first time i've reviewed your story and i must say that i LOVE IT! i get very happy when you update ^__^ I MUST POINT OUT TWO THINGS THOUGH! it's so tiny and insignificant but if i don't mention them it will eat away at me. it's pointless and doesn't really effect the story at all just pointless facts which you might find useful later on.

1) Barbara's eyes are unfortunately not green like Kory's but blue ((see stupid and insignificant just thought you'd like to know and the fact i know that is probably very sad))

2) in this chapter you say that Rachel comes home at 7 p.m. san fran time. then later when gar calls she says "it's like four there, isn't it?" while the amount of time difference ((3 hours *duh you know that*)) is correct the east coast is actually 3 hours ahead of pacific. ...wait... well... Gotham's ACTUALLY supposed to be in northern new york so it would be 4 hours... ...whatever it doesn't matter 3 is good enough for me. ((omg just make me shut up now...)) so yeah just wanted you to know that it would actually be 10 p.m. where gar is not 4... that's it. ... **sweatdrops**

please feel free to throw books in my direction ((harry potter preferably so i can read them whilst getting hit upside the head)) i just hope that helped you in some strange way.

LOVE THE STORY! XD! and i can't wait until you update again :)

~Shelly~
chittychittybangbang16
2007-08-08 . chapter 8
OMG! I love this story! It took me forever to read like an hour and a half and but it was well worth it. Update soon please.
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