   J'aime Pierre 2007-10-19 . chapter 1Very good, it bummed me out though. |
 Curley-Q 2007-10-19 . chapter 1good |
 InchesAwayFromThoseBoys 2007-10-19 . chapter 1great story line! keep on going! JESS RULES!lol |
| Charolette Lee 2006-10-13 . chapter 1 Amazing. Bloodly amazing. |
 Kitty the drunken butterfly 2006-10-08 . chapter 1Really like how you emphasised the point that he left. Interesting idea, very cool.
P.S. Recheck your spelling. There's a few errors here and there but nothing major. :) |
| Dodger Gilmore 2006-10-07 . chapter 1 Great writing here. Like the "he left" over and over and that you connect it back to TMT. And that he made her think. I like it. |
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