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| Paladin Dragoon 2008-05-02 ch 4,  | abuseMm, it's been a very long time: I had to read the story summary on your profile page to refresh my memory. XD Nevertheless, it cheered me up a lot. My favorite bits were with the flower vendor, and the last bit with Nikki. Sardonic humor does it for me every time. XD |
| Rayni 2006-11-25 ch 3, | abuseSo THAT's why Zoah wears a helmet! I laughed out loud. Awesome. And then I kept laughing as you wrote Marcy's voice perfectly. And went on to get Karsh into even more embarrassing situations. "I thought I told you I wasn't gay!" was pretty much the best thing ever. xD You gave Miki's character an original, unique personality, where I'd never found her interesting or had much respect for her. Excellent job. You must keep writing! I need to see what happens next! |
| Whitechapel 2006-11-14 ch 3, | abuseI just finished reading the third chapter, and right now I've got the most absurd mental image...I can't seem to stop grinning at the thought of it. Seriously, now... The premise of this story is entertaining; it's all too easy to imagine Karsh totally remaking himself in hopes of capturing Riddel's attention. His clueless attitude and the fact that he can see ridicule coming toward him from several directions only make the buildup that much better. I hope you'll continue with this. The way the tension has built up leaves me curious to find out what will happen when Karsh shows up dressed "practically in drag." He must be desperate indeed. |
| FiresealFFXI 2006-11-10 ch 3, anon. | abuseI've been waiting for updates and I love this fanfiction with every passing chapter! Keep 'em coming and good work. :) |
| Paladin Dragoon 2006-11-10 ch 3, | abuseMm, I would've reviewed yesterday, if not for the power outages we had... I'm practically drooling with suspense! XD ...Or anticipation, anyway. *snickers* Oh, heck, I can't believe Karsh is actually going for it... *cheers Karsh on* Nice one! XD |
| FiresealFFXI 2006-10-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseJust like your username, your fanfic... I love it! :) Please update soon. :) |
| Salacassera 2006-10-09 ch 1, | abuseI can't wait to see what happens next. The references to the game itself are also great. |
| Paladin Dragoon 2006-10-08 ch 1, | abuseOMIGOD! I REMEMBER THAT FORTUNE!! XD *jumps up and down and snickers maniacally* I love how it seems to be turning out...Can't wait to see how things'll go, so update soon! ^_^ |