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| Teri 2007-01-19 ch 2,  | abuseI wonder if you are involved with the Deaf community either through occupation, family, or personal involvement. You seem to have caught the picture well, even down to a father's hand slap when trying to use signs. Luckily, your Gil seems to have been able to heal at least a little bit. Your a very talented writer. Nice work. |
| Domo Arigato 2006-10-11 ch 2, | abuseI loved this story for so many reasons. Believable Grissom backstory, beautiful characterization, interesting original character that didn't take over the whole fic. I also enjoy a cool Tsingtao from time to time and I'm always amazed at how many French words are used in English. Well done. |
| leddy 2006-10-10 ch 2, | abuseTerrific ending. I enjoyed Adrian's reasons for leaving and what happened to him later on. It's nice that Grissom was able to forgive to some extent and be happy for his mother. I'm glad that everything with Adrain wasn't all forgive and forget on Grissom's part but he was able to understand why it happened. |
| everwoodgirl04 2006-10-09 ch 2, | abuseI loved the story! Keep writing! - Mel |
| jtbwriter 2006-10-09 ch 2, | abuseThat was amazing-Gris's father was hoist on his own petard- yet was forgiven. And Gris is finally healing from his own trauma. Thanks for a very loving and hopeful fic! |
| nzdeb 2006-10-09 ch 1, | abusehi, ohh I did enjoy this a bit of angst a bit of fluff and a grissom back story which makes for a very enteraining story , can't wait for the next chapter thanks for all your hard work believe me its really appreciated. |
| microgirl 2006-10-09 ch 2, | abuseVery nice. I like the way you filled in the gaps regarding Grissom's past. And you did great keeping him in character throughout the piece. Nice job! |
| odeepblue 2006-10-09 ch 2, | abuseabsolutely beautiful! i loved it ;) very true to the characters, but sweet and heart warming at the same time! i would love to see this story further, and how it can develope... maybe a granchild, and how that would happen with the lab and with grissoms father in the mix? please! lol ;) |
| anneruhland 2006-10-09 ch 2, | abuseI'm sitting here with tears dripping down my face. What a powerful story. It good to see some peace in Grissom's life and the promise of happy tomorrows. thanks for a lovely story. |
| Ming1 2006-10-09 ch 1, | abuseWhat a twist! I didn't think of it before. This is an awesome chapter. Thank you so much. I really enjoy it. |
| jtbwriter 2006-10-08 ch 1, | abuseOh...my God! What a story-what a bad cliffie! Shame! LOL! This is a goodie-what angst you've created here! AND-how great Sara handled it! Thanks for a very intriquing story! Now what?:) |
| leddy 2006-10-08 ch 1, | abuseI really like this, a bit of Grissom family angst with a combination of angry Grissom. You've become my favorite Grissom backstory writer. This would make a lot of sense based on the way his was changed. I don't blame Grissom for being upset since he felt like a letdown to his biological father. Can't wait for the next part. |
| odeepblue 2006-10-07 ch 1, | abuseoh boy, what a mess! poor grissom! i'll be expecting your next one! |
| Mystical G Panther 2006-10-07 ch 1, | abuseo interesting! update really soon! -mystical panther |
| RocketScientist2 2006-10-07 ch 1, | abuseTruely excellant. I thought I would just have a quick look and see, and was just taken in. Nicely in character and could easily be the case. I like the way you have sorted out the slight contradiction in Grissom's backstory. I had not thought of that! I hope the producer's do! Look forward to the next instalment. |