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Meia-Noite 2008-02-08 . chapter 5
Update, I tell you, update! Brilliant story, well-written, interesting plot, & you're not even up to the main event yet!
.-R.i.ku-Y.u.na-. 2007-11-07 . chapter 5
nice...
its interesting
update soon..
CaramelBoost 2007-09-22 . chapter 5
Should be interesting to see how Draco manages to sneak into Dumbledore's office before Harry and everyone. I know he has Snape on his side, but still. Speaking of Snape, I wonder if he told Draco that anything he takes with him would disintegrate on the spot? Quite an interesting fact, I like how you put it forth. It wasn't just rainbows and sunshine, and "Oh Harry, touch this and you'll go back in the past with no problems at all!" There was an action and a consenquence. Interesting way of doing it too, nice job. Nice update, I really look forward to the next chapter; it's the one that I've wanted to see since I started reading the fic.

xox Caramel
rekahneko 2007-09-09 . chapter 5
What a wonderfully fascinating story!
I can't wait to see how the past plays out for Harry and Draco (assuming they get where they are aiming in one piece anyhow).
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Argo 2007-08-20 . chapter 5
Very interesting story.
I wonder about phrase "You will not be able to carry anything back in time with you"
Does it mean, the boys will not have their wand, when they end up back in the past? Because if so, Draco will not be able to kill Harry straight away (unless he will try killing with bare hands). Anyway, Harry, at least will have The Hat to get his things, maybe, even his wand, but what about Draco?
oh, more than that, will they have their * clothes * upon arriving, since they "not be able to carry anything"? I could be turn amusing scene, when they find themselves - where they will be arriving to. anyway? Dumbledore's office? What if someone sees them? Maybe some Head Girl?
About that - will Harry's parents be the Head Girl and the Head Boy? Or it's not their seven year?
I also wonder, how Harry will react to Snape, being teased by Marauders.
RavenWriter89 2007-08-19 . chapter 5
May I say this was not what I expected when I decided to finally read this. Very well-written, with nice characterization and smooth transitions from one character to the next. To be honest I was expecting some sort of dreaded Mary-Sue-ism to appear. Thank you for disappointing me on THAT particular front.
Such a story interests me enough to ask questions, something I do rarely without any sarcasm. First off, where on earth did Harry aquire such a device? I'm sure the details are craved by other readers also.
Secondly, if Malfoy is travelling back with Harry to kill him, and only the owner can touch the Mygrator, how is Malfoy planning to return to his own time once Harry is dead (if all goes to plan)?
Thirdly, if it is James and Lily's past being changed, wouldn't Lupin's memories of that time also be changed? That being said, wouldn't other people's memories also be altered, such as Snape's or Dumbledore's?
These questions are not meant to be taken as critisisms; I am quite looking forward to the next chapter, and time travel stories are always fascinating. I love seeing how writers work around and through the paradoxes. Thanks for the story.
~Raven~
just jacs 2007-08-16 . chapter 4
wow this is a really well writen in depth fic. I really can't wait to see where you go with this, hope you update soon
just jacs 2007-08-16 . chapter 3
loving this just had to drop in and say I loved the letter at the end lol
CaramelBoost 2007-08-09 . chapter 4
Great update. You have amazing chapter lengths, and plots (I like that it took you awhile to get to this point) and in-depth, two dimensional characters. I liked how Narcissa wanted to save her son, but didn't so much like Lucius in this chapter.. I don't think he meant to kill his wife, though. But he *did* mean to kill his son. The git. Great work, I look forward to another chapter for this.. relativly soon? ::puppy dog eyes::

xox Caramel
KIM32 2007-07-24 . chapter 4
I had to reread the last 4 chapters because I couldn't remember much of it. You write really well. It flows smoothly and seems nicely in character. Poor Narcissa. I hope you write more soon. Please!:)
akuma-river 2007-07-07 . chapter 4
Wow.

So what happens next?

Why was Snape so against it?

What will Harry do in the past and how will it effect his present and future?

Love it.
Maria 2007-07-07 . chapter 4
I definitely haven't lost interest. I like that you take your time to explain why, how etc. instead of using two sentences... (Loved that comment in the end by the way:

Dumbledore: "Harry, you have to go back in time."
Harry: "Okay."

I have read so many stories, where the first chapter includes something like that - perhaps five sentences instead, and then Harry is in the past :-)

Keep up the good work and please update as soon as possible...!
LolitaAlexandria520-WaterWitch 2007-06-18 . chapter 2
hmm
KIM32 2006-12-27 . chapter 3
Definitely a good start. I'm curious what Draco has to do and when Harry has to go to.
Chuche 2006-12-18 . chapter 1
This is so TOTALLY GREAT!
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